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Array ( [sid] => 128755 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unttled [time] => 2006-11-27 19:29:09 [hometext] => I worte this song and cant htink of a title for it. I would apricate any sugestions Thanks!! [bodytext] => you helped me sing through my tears
and danced with me in the rain for two years
so now ill leave all my hopes and dreams
if youll only wait for me
becasue my heart is about to explode
and if you dont we'll never know
what we could have been
and what lies under our skin


these past two years have been the best of my life
up until the point i had to say goodbye
so tonight lets pretend ill say i love you
because truly i still do


remember what we were
and dont think of me when you kiss her
becasue i know i still think of you
and thats something i hoped i'd never do
i see your eyes in his
and yours are what i miss
why cant i forget you?
thats the only thing i cant do


these past two years have been the best of my life
up until the point i had to say goodbye
so tonight lets pretend ill say i love you
because truly i still do

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 34 [informant] => blindchoice [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Unttled

Contributed by blindchoice on Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 07:29:09 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



you helped me sing through my tears
and danced with me in the rain for two years
so now ill leave all my hopes and dreams
if youll only wait for me
becasue my heart is about to explode
and if you dont we'll never know
what we could have been
and what lies under our skin


these past two years have been the best of my life
up until the point i had to say goodbye
so tonight lets pretend ill say i love you
because truly i still do


remember what we were
and dont think of me when you kiss her
becasue i know i still think of you
and thats something i hoped i'd never do
i see your eyes in his
and yours are what i miss
why cant i forget you?
thats the only thing i cant do


these past two years have been the best of my life
up until the point i had to say goodbye
so tonight lets pretend ill say i love you
because truly i still do





Copyright © blindchoice ... [ 2006-11-27 19:29:09]
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Re: Unttled (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 10:45:41 AM AEST
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I am a song writer myself.
Were I you I would use a title
like ...
A Love in the Rain
Praying for Rain
or I might use Rain with a double
meaning since it sounds the same
as Reign
Perhaps .... Our Rain
or... The Rain of Our Love ... Our Rain of Love

I hope these ideas help... Love the song lyrics
Truly , Doug


Re: Unttled (User Rating: 1 )
by Nothingness on Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 02:02:01 PM AEST
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I really like this song and well i can relate wrote somehting simmilar and I would go with "Still in Love with you"




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