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Array ( [sid] => 128712 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gone Away... [time] => 2006-11-26 16:02:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I was alone that night
I stood on that spot
In the rain
In the dark
In the blackness
And hopeless

I looked up
The rain splashing on my face
Could not tell the weeping
Mixing tears
In the cold
Shivering
With a fear
You’re gone…

I cried that night
As the break-up
Im empty
So lonely
I wish u’d call me

Missing you...

You’re gone...
but not forgotten...

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Gone Away...

Contributed by Saloni on Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 04:02:36 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I was alone that night
I stood on that spot
In the rain
In the dark
In the blackness
And hopeless

I looked up
The rain splashing on my face
Could not tell the weeping
Mixing tears
In the cold
Shivering
With a fear
You’re gone…

I cried that night
As the break-up
Im empty
So lonely
I wish u’d call me

Missing you...

You’re gone...
but not forgotten...

Copyright Â© Saloni ... [ 2006-11-26 16:02:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Gone Away... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 12:50:06 AM AEST
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I love a poem that stirs something within me and this has done just that. I felt it each word.

Michelle

Re: Gone Away... (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthie1983 on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 01:01:34 PM AEST
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yea, i have to agree once someone is part of ur life and u care for them, u will never forget them but u just have to move on. U expressed urself in this poem and i do believe it gets better with time.

Re: Gone Away... (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 07:11:52 PM AEST
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Dearest Saloni~
I felt your sadness and it pains my heart. I'm so sorry this happened to you my friend.
I wish away your lonely nights & days dearest Saloni~ May you find peace within your ailing heart. May sorrow be replaced with love, joy & happiness my dear friend.
Big *heartfelt hugs* for you,
sue m

Re: Gone Away... (User Rating: 1 )
by shaba_11 on Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 09:58:59 AM AEST
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Wagwan Saloni? nice write.

Re: Gone Away... (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_in_the_darkness09 on Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 04:42:40 PM AEST
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awww, i am really sorry for what you went through, and i just wanna let you know that im here for you, i have gone through many hard things, but nothing is harder than losing a loved one....good luck in life, and feel better

{Ra!||}

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