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act like nothing is ever wrong
oh how i wish I was like you
you always know what to do

me on the other hand, i am weak
so broken and fragile, scared to speak
i cant deal with this..i hate it
i need to get out…its time to quit

quit this world, escape all this pain
what could i ever possibly gain
i cant watch my best friend dying
and the three others i love, constantly crying

why cant i take their pain away
i dont know what to do or what to say
i want to be better for all of you
but i really don’t think that’s something i can do

this depression is getting the best of me
a burden and a pain is all i’ll ever be
i’m at my breaking point, i’m falling apart
all my emotions are locked in my heart

i wont let them out anymore, its too much to bare
let it rip me apart, i don’t even care
all that matters is that they are okay
its not like i impact anyones day
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 319 [topic] => 61 [informant] => xforever_faking_a_smile3x [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
weak

Contributed by xforever_faking_a_smile3x on Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 01:14:33 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



how can you be so strong
act like nothing is ever wrong
oh how i wish I was like you
you always know what to do

me on the other hand, i am weak
so broken and fragile, scared to speak
i cant deal with this..i hate it
i need to get out…its time to quit

quit this world, escape all this pain
what could i ever possibly gain
i cant watch my best friend dying
and the three others i love, constantly crying

why cant i take their pain away
i dont know what to do or what to say
i want to be better for all of you
but i really don’t think that’s something i can do

this depression is getting the best of me
a burden and a pain is all i’ll ever be
i’m at my breaking point, i’m falling apart
all my emotions are locked in my heart

i wont let them out anymore, its too much to bare
let it rip me apart, i don’t even care
all that matters is that they are okay
its not like i impact anyones day




Copyright © xforever_faking_a_smile3x ... [ 2006-11-26 13:14:33]
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Re: weak (User Rating: 1 )
by Saloni on Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 04:06:54 PM AEST
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very touching poem.. its all about destiny.. don't give up..
keep strong

good read


Re: weak (User Rating: 1 )
by Packatack on Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 04:25:59 AM AEST
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Wow, i like your poem...i feel like that sometimes and i hate it


Re: weak (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 02:15:39 AM AEST
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im sorry for your pain, but......if your friends' wellbeing is that important to you, don't u think yours is to them too? would you like it if they decided to shut themselves out completely and put up a fake smile or would you rather know whats going on so you could make it better.....? anyway.

--talli




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