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Array ( [sid] => 128701 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hell no [time] => 2006-11-26 06:52:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => hell no.
i uttered those two words
and with them
your oversized ego went waaaay down
i hurt you
like you hurt me
glad i did
you sure as hell deserved it
cocky
thought you could get me back
just like that
thought i would come crawling back to you
you ******* took me for granted
jerk.
nobody can do that to me
not me.
i'm a person
unlike you
but you're just too **** stupid to realize it
that's it
you don't deserve me
i'll show you
you can't treat me like that
i knew you were an ***
but not that big of one
almost hard to believe
but not quite
i made a mistake in "loving" you
never again
now i'm trying to correct my mistake
i'd just love to forget those two months
but **** it i can't [comments] => 2 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 6 [informant] => musicXisXlife [notes] => Poem edited due to the use of bad language. Please read the site rules and remember that this is a family site and children may be reading. Thankyou. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

hell no

Contributed by musicXisXlife on Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 06:52:49 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

hell no.
i uttered those two words
and with them
your oversized ego went waaaay down
i hurt you
like you hurt me
glad i did
you sure as hell deserved it
cocky
thought you could get me back
just like that
thought i would come crawling back to you
you ******* took me for granted
jerk.
nobody can do that to me
not me.
i'm a person
unlike you
but you're just too **** stupid to realize it
that's it
you don't deserve me
i'll show you
you can't treat me like that
i knew you were an ***
but not that big of one
almost hard to believe
but not quite
i made a mistake in "loving" you
never again
now i'm trying to correct my mistake
i'd just love to forget those two months
but **** it i can't

Copyright © musicXisXlife ... [ 2006-11-26 06:52:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: hell no (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 07:04:26 AM AEST
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Hey Ailish, another good one. So is this poem about Dj?
Ya know I love ya. Hey, ya got Eric now. And Dj did not deserve you at all. The most he deserves is Natane, hah! ;)
.::Jess::.

Re: hell no (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 07:53:35 AM AEST
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pain, anger, sorrow...all in one. i can feel your anger, your pain...and it hurts! and i know it does...i've been there before. keep your head up...the world will be fine again. and i know you prolly hate me sayin that...but you know deep down it's true)

you're an amazing writer,

- Bethani -

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