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Odi et Amo
Contributed by
yangdantien
on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 07:14:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Is she the one?
A proud coonass Virgo suicide girl
after a Tori Amos phase
kicks into a 2 year tattoo
every inch her back is inked
to an exact image with hair flowing
and eyes that follow you across the room
for a lucky few.
But to the ER they rushed her
collapsed near catatonic
anaphylactic shock from
to many colors caused
blood poisoning
3 months on IV
earns the tag she wears boldly.
She's drunk loud and dying
to see Apocalypto
she tells her stories blithely,
like how she loves bare all
and cant stop pressing the button,
shes the self proclaimed queen
of cookies & cream.
Everyones dream. So we go out
all the rockers sweat muscled
rowdy in straw hats
the lead yells out:
"y'all goin get some kitty tonight? I ammmm"
screaming into a number that gets the dance floor packed.
She says dance with me
but instead of getting up she grabs my hand
scrapes my knuckles under the table
spilling our drinks...
OK so I flexed them
until her rebel yell
matched the clubs frenzy,
bouncing off the walls
and each other
till we were drenched.
Yet she easily locks horns over
petty crap,
she so selectively serious.
Damn is this the start?
What our parents talked about
after arguing about the kids
when they laid the curse upon us
you know the short one:
'Wait and you'll see...'
'I hope they do to you
what you did to me!'
AJPIII
Copyright ©
yangdantien
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2006-11-25 19:14:09]
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Re: Odi et Amo
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by shelby on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 07:48:54 PM AEST
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Ohh man this I liked lol!
Details are zany! Wooo hooooo
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Re: Odi et Amo
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by ClancyExistential on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 08:55:40 PM AEST
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man I wish her eyes would follow me across the room, is she the one? she's the one I dream about, thank you for detailing her so well yet you left me with my own imaginings of how damaged and beautiful and real she is.........
after a Tori Amos phase, she loves being nude, pressing her button, Every one's dream, she sure is mine...
I'm so glad I read that!!!! Can't wait to read more..........
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Re: Odi et Amo
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 02:33:59 PM AEST
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Ooh man, I am so sorry I missed this. Please PM me.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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