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Array ( [sid] => 128642 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pass and Catch [time] => 2006-11-24 18:51:26 [hometext] => I hope by living selflessly I'll be rewarded by Karma...but that's yet to be revealed. [bodytext] => a glutton of a man,
mistaken by respect
having never seen far
from the stains on mother's window panes
freshly rained on
she'd beat him,
taught him rhythm,

karma is a game of pass and catch
that can end ya dead,

a bum asks for change
a woman grips her womb,
neither has any use for copper
however thankful if so offered
a glutton of a man,
finds power in abuse
he tosses a dirty napkin
he kills for more,

keeps his being smooth,
clean up has been his stalemate
since day one,
smiles for horrified faces
twice undone
he's lost his cool,

kicking his own ***
a glutton of a man,
cocaine and twice undone
wound too tightly
a man killed another
dead over a pool cue,

not like the pass and catch
the law plays
this glutton of a man
avoids their game
no longer has blood stained his hands,

now, this man is to die,
never better timing some shall say
he knows what's to be paid,
reincarnate with a better hustle,

he cowers on both knees
carpet sinks it's teeth into his skin
he knows the future
he recalls their names
a haunted family of three,

he wants to see his wife he hates
claim children one and two
he's okay with the broken spirits along the way
his regrets he
still
can not place,

he wishes not like most
still bloodthirsty,

he sees the family of three
kick in his front door
while he kneels they
placed their guns to his head
repeating the words
"the beast is marked"
they shot him six times,

sick bunch say they're from God,

they have a fetish for repentance
our neighbors they are humans
they will for more blood

watching it sing
from this man's wounds,
forming a crosss
at the feet of Divine reflection
and they dropped their weapons,
removed their clothes
let their fangs breathe
over the body they preyed,

today;
a glutton of a man just got eaten
for Bad Karma is never paid in dreams,
strengthening the lock
God has
on chao's cage.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 276 [topic] => 25 [informant] => ClancyExistential [notes] => Poem edited due to the use of bad language. Please read the site rules. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Pass and Catch

Contributed by ClancyExistential on Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 06:51:26 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



a glutton of a man,
mistaken by respect
having never seen far
from the stains on mother's window panes
freshly rained on
she'd beat him,
taught him rhythm,

karma is a game of pass and catch
that can end ya dead,

a bum asks for change
a woman grips her womb,
neither has any use for copper
however thankful if so offered
a glutton of a man,
finds power in abuse
he tosses a dirty napkin
he kills for more,

keeps his being smooth,
clean up has been his stalemate
since day one,
smiles for horrified faces
twice undone
he's lost his cool,

kicking his own ***
a glutton of a man,
cocaine and twice undone
wound too tightly
a man killed another
dead over a pool cue,

not like the pass and catch
the law plays
this glutton of a man
avoids their game
no longer has blood stained his hands,

now, this man is to die,
never better timing some shall say
he knows what's to be paid,
reincarnate with a better hustle,

he cowers on both knees
carpet sinks it's teeth into his skin
he knows the future
he recalls their names
a haunted family of three,

he wants to see his wife he hates
claim children one and two
he's okay with the broken spirits along the way
his regrets he
still
can not place,

he wishes not like most
still bloodthirsty,

he sees the family of three
kick in his front door
while he kneels they
placed their guns to his head
repeating the words
"the beast is marked"
they shot him six times,

sick bunch say they're from God,

they have a fetish for repentance
our neighbors they are humans
they will for more blood

watching it sing
from this man's wounds,
forming a crosss
at the feet of Divine reflection
and they dropped their weapons,
removed their clothes
let their fangs breathe
over the body they preyed,

today;
a glutton of a man just got eaten
for Bad Karma is never paid in dreams,
strengthening the lock
God has
on chao's cage.




Copyright © ClancyExistential ... [ 2006-11-24 18:51:26]
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Re: Pass and Catch (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 07:01:19 PM AEST
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Intense and deep write you have here.
I do believe in Karma at times though it seems to take along time coming back around but it does.

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~Michelle~


Re: Pass and Catch (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 01:16:06 PM AEST
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I noticed I had not commented on this one and Dude its good, a bit angry but controlled... I really liked this and hope you would post some more...

Peace In
Yang




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