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Array ( [sid] => 128625 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Beginning [time] => 2006-11-24 11:43:51 [hometext] => I Was Asked To Write A Song, Opinions Welcomed. Feedback. Thanks xo [bodytext] => Use me
Abuse me
Get what you want
And leave

Pack your bags
I no longer need you
Cut me out
While I stay here
Sitting alone
With the one thing
That really cares
It hurts less
Then you hurt me
It scars me less
Then you do

This is the beginning
Of my future alone
No one by my side
No one to pick up this mess
This is the beginning
Of a messed up life
With nothing left to loose

And Once again
I’m here alone
In this cold alleyway
Of pure hatred
Nothing left to live for
Nothing left of me

You’ve won
Again and again
Not once have a pulled away
Or told you to stop
I just let you love me
Kiss me
Hold me
Like there was nothing left
To live for
But me

So this is the beginning
Of my future alone
No one by my side
No one to pick up this mess
This is the beginning
Of a messed up life
With nothing left to loose

I itch and I scream
For one more chance
One more moment alone
With you
But I know what would happen
And that’s the reason
I told you to leave
Why bring back
Satan himself
When I just got rid of him?
Why put myself
Though all the trouble
The heartache and pain
Again, for only one more chance?

So this is the beginning
Of my future alone
No one by my side
No one to pick up this mess
This is the beginning
Of a messed up life
With nothing left to loose,
With nothing left to loose,
With nothing left to loose. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 34 [informant] => JenJen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

The Beginning

Contributed by JenJen on Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 11:43:51 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Use me
Abuse me
Get what you want
And leave

Pack your bags
I no longer need you
Cut me out
While I stay here
Sitting alone
With the one thing
That really cares
It hurts less
Then you hurt me
It scars me less
Then you do

This is the beginning
Of my future alone
No one by my side
No one to pick up this mess
This is the beginning
Of a messed up life
With nothing left to loose

And Once again
I’m here alone
In this cold alleyway
Of pure hatred
Nothing left to live for
Nothing left of me

You’ve won
Again and again
Not once have a pulled away
Or told you to stop
I just let you love me
Kiss me
Hold me
Like there was nothing left
To live for
But me

So this is the beginning
Of my future alone
No one by my side
No one to pick up this mess
This is the beginning
Of a messed up life
With nothing left to loose

I itch and I scream
For one more chance
One more moment alone
With you
But I know what would happen
And that’s the reason
I told you to leave
Why bring back
Satan himself
When I just got rid of him?
Why put myself
Though all the trouble
The heartache and pain
Again, for only one more chance?

So this is the beginning
Of my future alone
No one by my side
No one to pick up this mess
This is the beginning
Of a messed up life
With nothing left to loose,
With nothing left to loose,
With nothing left to loose.

Copyright Â© JenJen ... [ 2006-11-24 11:43:51]
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Re: The Beginning (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 02:02:57 PM AEST
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I think it is put together well though is very sad.

~Michelle~

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