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Array ( [sid] => 128620 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Victim Of Love [time] => 2006-11-24 04:50:32 [hometext] => Love - Is it Poison or Passion? [bodytext] => My heart beckoned from the eternal glow,
The wrath of time held in my palm,
Together the march is formed through the journey of two,
Only reality remains for me to conquer.

Moving forward with the vision in sight
The traveler will find his domain
The search will end all time
And time will find its place.

The hunt can only continue
When a new reality is created
Waiting, the disease is patient
A victim of love will seek.

February 11th 2002 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Balmain_Tiger [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Victim Of Love

Contributed by Balmain_Tiger on Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 04:50:32 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

My heart beckoned from the eternal glow,
The wrath of time held in my palm,
Together the march is formed through the journey of two,
Only reality remains for me to conquer.

Moving forward with the vision in sight
The traveler will find his domain
The search will end all time
And time will find its place.

The hunt can only continue
When a new reality is created
Waiting, the disease is patient
A victim of love will seek.

February 11th 2002

Copyright © Balmain_Tiger ... [ 2006-11-24 04:50:32]
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Re: Victim Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 08:33:39 AM AEST
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very interesting write !! i like the way you qusetioned love.. and i think in some cases loving someone can be poision if loving the wrong person.. great job with this piece

JENNI

Re: Victim Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 01:11:58 PM AEST
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I loved the first line, I would say that is a beautiful beginning. The entire write soars to lovely places and you are right it can be one or the other. We cannot know of the sweet without the taste of bitter at times though.

~Michelle~

Re: Victim Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by X--KissMeImContagious--X on Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 02:15:25 PM AEST
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Wow...i think htis is juts about the best write i have read on here so far. it's so revealing and it's just completely amazing. i simply adore it.
Cheers,
Moi
XoXoX

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