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gyrates around me
it's so arousing
as I am trying my best
to pretend
I am uneffected,
she's talking and she's touching
and
I'm feeling something is coming
still I try my best
not to succumb to the bliss.

I am On fire
with a strange desire,
she's got what I need
and try not to let her know...
but ooh
when ever she is around
resistance is futile
I lose control.

I'm silently screaming
as she tells me
that she needs me
with such sweet charms
she is so hard to ignore,
I'm getting a feeling
she's concealing
something deep dark and revealing
then I suddenly remember
she's done this all before.

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Resistance Is Futile

Contributed by secretwind on Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 11:56:15 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Sweetly her body
gyrates around me
it's so arousing
as I am trying my best
to pretend
I am uneffected,
she's talking and she's touching
and
I'm feeling something is coming
still I try my best
not to succumb to the bliss.

I am On fire
with a strange desire,
she's got what I need
and try not to let her know...
but ooh
when ever she is around
resistance is futile
I lose control.

I'm silently screaming
as she tells me
that she needs me
with such sweet charms
she is so hard to ignore,
I'm getting a feeling
she's concealing
something deep dark and revealing
then I suddenly remember
she's done this all before.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2006-11-21 23:56:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Resistance Is Futile (User Rating: 1 )
by ToriVeigh on Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 01:48:03 AM AEST
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WOW!!!! I loved this. So descriptive, expressive and evocative - Great Write!

Re: Resistance Is Futile (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 01:46:49 PM AEST
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Clever! with a nice twist at the ending!

Re: Resistance Is Futile (User Rating: 1 )
by books_4gal on Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 04:43:08 PM AEST
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Oh my, how well you've woven the words together to express the mystery of attraction, how one person can overwhelm our senses by their very presence. Very enjoyable read and I liked the ending.

Peace~

Re: Resistance Is Futile (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 05:46:44 PM AEST
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Wow, this is great. You express yourself so well in this. I loved the ending, a real twist.
Well done and keep up the magnificent work~
big warm hugs,
sue m

Re: Resistance Is Futile (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 05:39:04 PM AEST
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Yea, that's how it goes at times.
good work dear friend.
big smiles,
emy

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