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Array ( [sid] => 128518 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wait below Waves [time] => 2006-11-21 15:23:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i'm met my decision
on a road of no dreams
the sky's a bruised vision
if you know what it means

i love you my sorrow
i've decided "i do"
will you marry tomorrow
my ill point of view
__________

i have my addictions
and I hide them from God
she has her predictions
that i'll someday be gone
but i swallow and save
my pride to the grave.
__________

i've met the man waiting
in the stairway below
he needs not keep baiting
cause my future i know

i wait below waves
for the sun to set soon
so i can't feel the days
become one tired tune

dw [comments] => 2 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 66 [informant] => In_a_While [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

Wait below Waves

Contributed by In_a_While on Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 03:23:41 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

i'm met my decision
on a road of no dreams
the sky's a bruised vision
if you know what it means

i love you my sorrow
i've decided "i do"
will you marry tomorrow
my ill point of view
__________

i have my addictions
and I hide them from God
she has her predictions
that i'll someday be gone
but i swallow and save
my pride to the grave.
__________

i've met the man waiting
in the stairway below
he needs not keep baiting
cause my future i know

i wait below waves
for the sun to set soon
so i can't feel the days
become one tired tune

dw

Copyright © In_a_While ... [ 2006-11-21 15:23:41]
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Re: Wait below Waves (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 09:59:16 PM AEST
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DW~
This is an addiction that I hope you overcome my friend. Sure it numbs the pain and our troubles go away for a little while, but sadly after the high reality sets in again.
I have the utmost faith in you dearest DW~
You are a very gifted artist and poet I'd hate to
see that all go to waste. I worry about you and I hope u are keeping well my dear friend.
A thought provoking write ascribed by the very gifted DW~ Keep up the awesome work.
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m

Re: Wait below Waves (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 10:24:14 PM AEST
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well done
excellent flow.
never give up
and
fall into the pits.

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