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Array ( [sid] => 128498 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mary [time] => 2006-11-21 01:39:13 [hometext] => well I wasn't sure what catagory to put this poem in - it's kind of a little bit angry/emotional/disapointed in what could have been a really good friendship but an experience of rejection for no good reason & it's about the feeling of anguish behind that [bodytext] => Mary I really liked
Yet I wasn't being so bright

I thought she my friend
on that I couldn't depend

For goodness sake
twas all a fake

It was only pretense
she acted like my friend

Instead she my foe
pumping me for info

what she really feels
is called ill will

Could it be a mistake
it's trouble she wants to make

Well I'll admit
perturbed I am a bit

Truly fond I was of Mary
though often she's contrary

I told much in trust
Now I feel such disgust

And I said to her once more
as I said a # of times before

I always liked you Mary
We'd make great friends
go out & drink sherry.

but you see
Mary didn't care
to be friends with me

Mary said enough friends she had
I think that's really quite sad

It's hard to find good friendships
They're very special kinships

My few friends I thank thee Lord
they strike a very special chord
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 16 [informant] => visionarybee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
Mary

Contributed by visionarybee on Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 01:39:13 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



Mary I really liked
Yet I wasn't being so bright

I thought she my friend
on that I couldn't depend

For goodness sake
twas all a fake

It was only pretense
she acted like my friend

Instead she my foe
pumping me for info

what she really feels
is called ill will

Could it be a mistake
it's trouble she wants to make

Well I'll admit
perturbed I am a bit

Truly fond I was of Mary
though often she's contrary

I told much in trust
Now I feel such disgust

And I said to her once more
as I said a # of times before

I always liked you Mary
We'd make great friends
go out & drink sherry.

but you see
Mary didn't care
to be friends with me

Mary said enough friends she had
I think that's really quite sad

It's hard to find good friendships
They're very special kinships

My few friends I thank thee Lord
they strike a very special chord




Copyright © visionarybee ... [ 2006-11-21 01:39:13]
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Re: Mary (User Rating: 1 )
by trackiller2006 on Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 08:25:43 PM AEST
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Beautifully written!


Re: Mary (User Rating: 1 )
by SoUR_GuRL67 on Wednesday, 22nd November 2006 @ 04:36:01 AM AEST
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Wonderful!
Sadly enough, true friends ARE hard to find.
Love and godbless-
K




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