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Array ( [sid] => 128483 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stranjelz [time] => 2006-11-20 18:43:18 [hometext] => The divinity of human fraility [bodytext] => When from way on high~

back to the world falls

Such as you & I~

who have Stranjelz been called...


The powers that be~

are thrown in our face

Themselves by decreed~

our, "fall" one from grace...


Although not deterred~

because hurt, we'll cry

'Til looking absurd~

with red swollen eyes...


Then back on our feet~

heads up in the clouds

To mistakes repeat~

we're never too proud...


If not first from is learned~

again must be taught

To not be by burned~

or uselessly fought...


Ourselves in believed~

whoever we are

Sometimes as percieved~

we are quite bizarre...


With souls at the helm~

& hearts on our sleeves

Many are truths realms~

out there to conceive...


To others understand~

we're willing to try

Perhaps hand in hand~

in turn teach to fly...


Then together soar~

as high as we dare

And knock on heavens door~

just to see who is there...



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Stranjelz

Contributed by MisfitMe on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 06:43:18 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal



When from way on high~

back to the world falls

Such as you & I~

who have Stranjelz been called...


The powers that be~

are thrown in our face

Themselves by decreed~

our, "fall" one from grace...


Although not deterred~

because hurt, we'll cry

'Til looking absurd~

with red swollen eyes...


Then back on our feet~

heads up in the clouds

To mistakes repeat~

we're never too proud...


If not first from is learned~

again must be taught

To not be by burned~

or uselessly fought...


Ourselves in believed~

whoever we are

Sometimes as percieved~

we are quite bizarre...


With souls at the helm~

& hearts on our sleeves

Many are truths realms~

out there to conceive...


To others understand~

we're willing to try

Perhaps hand in hand~

in turn teach to fly...


Then together soar~

as high as we dare

And knock on heavens door~

just to see who is there...







Copyright © MisfitMe ... [ 2006-11-20 18:43:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Stranjelz (User Rating: 1 )
by tearstained_soul on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 07:15:13 PM AEST
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wow! that was AWESOME!!! through most of it i was like, yea.. this is good, and then the last lines "then together soar, as high as we dare, and knock onb heavens door, just to see who is there.." that was GENIOUS!!!! i love your writing!!! Keep rockin' homey!

britt


Re: Stranjelz (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 12:03:17 PM AEST
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Man, that was one cool write. I liked the ending. I so enjoy reading what you've penned.
Peace and hugs,
Laura


Re: Stranjelz (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 02:12:55 AM AEST
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Inspiritus filled with the breath of spirit and wisdom:

"...With souls at the helm~

& hearts on our sleeves

Many are truths realms~

out there to conceive..."

Your wonder fills me with visions...

Peace
AJ


Re: Stranjelz (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:17:42 PM AEST
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"January 10th, 1845
New Cross, Hatcham, Surrey

I love your verses with all my heart, dear Miss... and this is no off-hand complimentary letter that I shall write,--whatever else, no prompt matter-of-course recognition of your genius and there a graceful and natural end of the thing: since the day last week when I first read your poems, I quite laugh to remember how I have been turning again in my mind what I should be able to tell you of their effect upon me--for in the first flush of delight I though I would this once get out of my habit of purely passive enjoyment, when I do really enjoy, and thoroughly justify my admiration--perhaps even, as a loyal fellow-craftsman should, try and find fault and do you some little good to be proud of hereafter!--but nothing comes of it all--so into me has it gone, and part of me has it become, this great living poetry of yours, not a flower of which but took root and grew... oh, how different that is from lying to be dried and pressed flat and prized highly and put in a book with a proper account at bottom, and shut up and put away... and the book called a 'Flora', besides! After all, I need not give up the thought of doing that, too, in time; because even now, talking with whoever is worthy, I can give reason for my faith in one and another excellence, the fresh strange music, the affluent language, the exquisite pathos and true new brave thought--but in this addressing myself to you, your own self, and for the first time, my feeling rises altogether. I do, as I say, love these Books with all my heart-- and I love you too: do you know I was once seeing you? ...one morning "would you like to see Miss?"--then ...went to announce me,--then he returned... you were too unwell -- and now it is years ago--and I feel as at some untoward passage in my travels--as if I had been close, so close, to some world's-wonder in chapel on crypt,... only a screen to push and I might have entered -- but there was some slight... so it now seems... slight and just-sufficient bar to admission, and the half-opened door shut, and I went home my thousands of miles, and the sight was never to be!

Well, these Poems were to be--and this true thankful joy and pride with which I feel myself.

Yours ever faithfully
Robert Browning"




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