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Array ( [sid] => 128481 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => PLUTO [time] => 2006-11-20 18:00:19 [hometext] => there is nothing left over , let's just go away forever [bodytext] => there is only one thing i know that there must be a way to go

yeah, I have never been in love
yeah ,I have never had those pretty stuff..

i convince my self that i get what i want but the truth I'm not
i'm just a man withnothin ,i only keep laughin..

tell me should i cry for help now ..? no i don't
i cry on my self ,with ma self

i laugh with you but beleive me i'm crying inside,,
and someday we will just collide..
i often try talking about me, but i'm actually seeking you to hear me,

it's not a poem this time ,it's nothing
and i don wonna know any thing

hiding behinde my smile is the one i used to be.. why the hell this happenning to me..
why even i should write this . when i beleive that no body cares.
gifting you with sympathy or a grace

so why this damn life really hurts most of time..?
hey Sir , Mrs would you through me a dime?
that you with that helping me not to commit a crime..

i say earth circle around me, is that's how i should be?
no howcome?? people say i''m not . so what??

have you ever controlled your happiness?
or you are just like me happyless??

i mean when you feel so sad ..could you just at once cheer your self up?
or you are just fed up..

nevermind forget it now i guess there is nothing left over for you and me..
let's just go away..setting our selves free

i consider me sitting at PLUTO , just hoping to forget your photo
huh!! I know there is no air..but somehow i still aware

yeah my heart still on fire , also my chest is now a blown tire/
like in earth lonlyness i'm grieving on my knees hoping to breathe [comments] => 2 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 32 [informant] => onlyoneheart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
PLUTO

Contributed by onlyoneheart on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 06:00:19 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



there is only one thing i know that there must be a way to go

yeah, I have never been in love
yeah ,I have never had those pretty stuff..

i convince my self that i get what i want but the truth I'm not
i'm just a man withnothin ,i only keep laughin..

tell me should i cry for help now ..? no i don't
i cry on my self ,with ma self

i laugh with you but beleive me i'm crying inside,,
and someday we will just collide..
i often try talking about me, but i'm actually seeking you to hear me,

it's not a poem this time ,it's nothing
and i don wonna know any thing

hiding behinde my smile is the one i used to be.. why the hell this happenning to me..
why even i should write this . when i beleive that no body cares.
gifting you with sympathy or a grace

so why this damn life really hurts most of time..?
hey Sir , Mrs would you through me a dime?
that you with that helping me not to commit a crime..

i say earth circle around me, is that's how i should be?
no howcome?? people say i''m not . so what??

have you ever controlled your happiness?
or you are just like me happyless??

i mean when you feel so sad ..could you just at once cheer your self up?
or you are just fed up..

nevermind forget it now i guess there is nothing left over for you and me..
let's just go away..setting our selves free

i consider me sitting at PLUTO , just hoping to forget your photo
huh!! I know there is no air..but somehow i still aware

yeah my heart still on fire , also my chest is now a blown tire/
like in earth lonlyness i'm grieving on my knees hoping to breathe




Copyright © onlyoneheart ... [ 2006-11-20 18:00:19]
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Re: PLUTO (User Rating: 1 )
by onlyoneheart on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 06:03:47 PM AEST
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here was the poem i can never send to people i know...


Re: PLUTO (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 06:22:53 PM AEST
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such potential in this....if i could just get past the parts that don't make sense....i can almost get, and feel the idea though...and i think...it could be great....if you could just...um..clean it up a bit....it's a little messy......try...reviewing your writting before actually posting it...or better yet...get someone else to review it so they can help you edit it...maybe?




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