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Array ( [sid] => 128478 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Things often hidden [time] => 2006-11-20 16:31:47 [hometext] => a love defered could still blossom but never as beautiful as it could have been. [bodytext] => Things often hidden,
locked deep away inside.
Feelings that are sometimes left alone.
Deep in the heart to reside.

Feelings that could break someone
Sadden them to the bone,
Feelings that could heal,
Seeds of love to be sewn.

The question then,
these feelings show,
to keep them locked away inside?
Or release them for that one to know?

To keep them inside,
In darkness for them to bloom,
Would be a travesty,
For beauty to be in such gloom.

To plant the seeds
In the heart they belong,
A beautiful flower would arise,
In the place it should have been all along.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 33 [informant] => SageofHalo123330 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Things often hidden

Contributed by SageofHalo123330 on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 04:31:47 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Things often hidden,
locked deep away inside.
Feelings that are sometimes left alone.
Deep in the heart to reside.

Feelings that could break someone
Sadden them to the bone,
Feelings that could heal,
Seeds of love to be sewn.

The question then,
these feelings show,
to keep them locked away inside?
Or release them for that one to know?

To keep them inside,
In darkness for them to bloom,
Would be a travesty,
For beauty to be in such gloom.

To plant the seeds
In the heart they belong,
A beautiful flower would arise,
In the place it should have been all along.

Copyright © SageofHalo123330 ... [ 2006-11-20 16:31:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Things often hidden (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 05:36:38 PM AEST
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this is so true! you've touched my heart and make me want to confess my love to that one special person...despite him having a girlfriend....
hidden love is a pain, and telling that person is more often than not the right thing to do...it sounds so poetic when you say it!
good write!
ashley :-)

Re: Things often hidden (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 05:51:13 PM AEST
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to hide your feelings is a travesty indeed..this was very well written. nicely done. i enjoyed this.

Re: Things often hidden (User Rating: 1 )
by AirHead on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 03:17:27 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful

Re: Things often hidden (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 6th May 2008 @ 06:46:32 AM AEST
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Lovely write..I agree with Ashley...
Jenni

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