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Array ( [sid] => 128474 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i was [time] => 2006-11-20 15:18:38 [hometext] => its actually longer.....like three pages long, but i shortened it up....so have fun reading... [bodytext] => i was the rift
that sailed you to the island of gitf
i was the best thing that ever happened to you
now both our lives you want us to loose
i was your love that took away your anger
now you say that life doesn't matter
i was your focus when life got chaotic
now you say life doesn't matter and ***** it
i was your sky when you was blue
now you want both of us to be fools
i was your designated driver when you was drunk
now me from your llife you've shunned
i was your path when you needed one
now you want both of our lives to be done
i was your light when days turned dark
now on deaths ride you want us to embark
i was you everyday advice
now you want to end our lives
i was your perfect where there was imperfections
now you want to die because of depression
i was your knowledge when you didn't know
now you want both of us to die, then go
i was your feelings when you never felt
now both of us on life you want us to bail
i was your image when you had none
now you want to end the just started fun
i was your everything and your all
now you want us both to break and fall
i am your life and you are mine
we can both make it if we keep trying [comments] => 2 [counter] => 790 [topic] => 6 [informant] => youngpoet69 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
i was

Contributed by youngpoet69 on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 03:18:38 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



i was the rift
that sailed you to the island of gitf
i was the best thing that ever happened to you
now both our lives you want us to loose
i was your love that took away your anger
now you say that life doesn't matter
i was your focus when life got chaotic
now you say life doesn't matter and ***** it
i was your sky when you was blue
now you want both of us to be fools
i was your designated driver when you was drunk
now me from your llife you've shunned
i was your path when you needed one
now you want both of our lives to be done
i was your light when days turned dark
now on deaths ride you want us to embark
i was you everyday advice
now you want to end our lives
i was your perfect where there was imperfections
now you want to die because of depression
i was your knowledge when you didn't know
now you want both of us to die, then go
i was your feelings when you never felt
now both of us on life you want us to bail
i was your image when you had none
now you want to end the just started fun
i was your everything and your all
now you want us both to break and fall
i am your life and you are mine
we can both make it if we keep trying




Copyright © youngpoet69 ... [ 2006-11-20 15:18:38]
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Re: i was (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 03:25:23 PM AEST
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nicely done, your emaotion comes through nicely!

wiz


Re: i was (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 03:26:27 PM AEST
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uh, i meant to say "emotion"...lol




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