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That bows it's head to shed it's tears
And every teardrop falls on down
And through the earth it spears
Where the dirt and grass drink thirstily
As if they enjoy the willow's pain
They drink the coming tears
Like the teardrops of the rain

And they sway and move into the wind
To dance as if in joy
As if the willow's lonely pain
Is that of a simple toy
And the willow weeps all alone
For no-one seems to care
And the pour little weeping willow
Accepts that life's not fair

So cry your tears my little willow
Accept the pain you're in
My lonely little weeping willow
With so much heartache in
Cry today and cry tonight
The pain will never heal
It's the only thing within this world
That you will ever feel [comments] => 6 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Harimitsu [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Weeping Willow

Contributed by Harimitsu on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 01:36:51 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

See the crying, weeping willow
That bows it's head to shed it's tears
And every teardrop falls on down
And through the earth it spears
Where the dirt and grass drink thirstily
As if they enjoy the willow's pain
They drink the coming tears
Like the teardrops of the rain

And they sway and move into the wind
To dance as if in joy
As if the willow's lonely pain
Is that of a simple toy
And the willow weeps all alone
For no-one seems to care
And the pour little weeping willow
Accepts that life's not fair

So cry your tears my little willow
Accept the pain you're in
My lonely little weeping willow
With so much heartache in
Cry today and cry tonight
The pain will never heal
It's the only thing within this world
That you will ever feel

Copyright © Harimitsu ... [ 2006-11-20 13:36:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Weeping Willow (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 02:13:37 PM AEST
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beautiful and sad. as if your talking to me, i'm sure many others will feel the same. nicely done.

Re: Weeping Willow (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 02:42:56 PM AEST
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wonderful!! sad...but a great write!!

Re: Weeping Willow (User Rating: 1 )
by RandyBabyx3 on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 03:05:52 PM AEST
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This reminds me of...me. I like it a lot. Good job.

Re: Weeping Willow (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 03:12:45 PM AEST
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very nice...those last 3 lines are great, as is the whole poem...nicely done..

wiz

Re: Weeping Willow (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 06:06:32 PM AEST
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An incredible write you have here.
Flowed nicely, meter wonderful also.

Michelle

Re: Weeping Willow (User Rating: 1 )
by Nothingness on Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 09:04:19 AM AEST
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Wow...This is such a wonderful poem sad but so beautiful, My favorite lines are;
And the willow weeps all alone
For no-one seems to care
And the pour little weeping willow
Accepts that life's not fair
Fantastic write your an excelent write!

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