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Array ( [sid] => 12839 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2003-02-17 22:40:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => No I don’t hate you,
Would I be this hurt if I did,
The fact remains I’m jealous,
Of the guy you are now with.

You changed your feelings every day,
“You know I love you” I would say,
Can you kiss me you may say,
I grow tired of the games you play.

I know you’re not a bad person,
Deep down I know it’s true,
But you treated me so badly,
As to why I have no clue.

I gave you everything I had,
Which is more than you asked for I know,
But in return you gave me nothing,
Was that hard for you to do?

In ways I meant more than anyone you’ve met,
Our times were special and I don’t regret,
Those times I’d swap for feelings you gave others though,
The feelings of love and want I and most of all respect.

You never meant to hurt me?
We both know that you still did,
You never even cared for me,
Until now, too late, that is.

I live no more as Steven,
He died some time ago,
I ask you not to hate me,
And beg you don’t get low.

I fear the person I’ve become,
I hate the things that I have done,
I know not what I could do,
I’m scared that one day I may hurt you.

I’m sad you know,
Know not how low I can go,
Want it to end,
That makes me a bad person though.

Should I go to heaven?
Should I go to hell?
I want to sleep forever,
So my pain not dreams will end.
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Untitled

Contributed by Steve_Class on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



No I don’t hate you,
Would I be this hurt if I did,
The fact remains I’m jealous,
Of the guy you are now with.

You changed your feelings every day,
“You know I love you” I would say,
Can you kiss me you may say,
I grow tired of the games you play.

I know you’re not a bad person,
Deep down I know it’s true,
But you treated me so badly,
As to why I have no clue.

I gave you everything I had,
Which is more than you asked for I know,
But in return you gave me nothing,
Was that hard for you to do?

In ways I meant more than anyone you’ve met,
Our times were special and I don’t regret,
Those times I’d swap for feelings you gave others though,
The feelings of love and want I and most of all respect.

You never meant to hurt me?
We both know that you still did,
You never even cared for me,
Until now, too late, that is.

I live no more as Steven,
He died some time ago,
I ask you not to hate me,
And beg you don’t get low.

I fear the person I’ve become,
I hate the things that I have done,
I know not what I could do,
I’m scared that one day I may hurt you.

I’m sad you know,
Know not how low I can go,
Want it to end,
That makes me a bad person though.

Should I go to heaven?
Should I go to hell?
I want to sleep forever,
So my pain not dreams will end.




Copyright © Steve_Class ... [ 2003-02-17 22:40:00]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:08:21 AM AEST
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nice, been there felt that


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by midnight_writer on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 09:44:59 PM AEST
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love it...it's amazing. i've been there...

pain...never really goes away...

Midnight~Amaya




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