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Array ( [sid] => 128387 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Need You [time] => 2006-11-18 12:59:55 [hometext] => I wrote this a long time ago when I was severely heart-broken and needed a release [bodytext] => So,
You want to leave?
Go ahead,
I'll live for now,
Some how...

I need your Love,
But you turn away from Me.
Now I am Alone,
Completely.

My Heart grows dark,
Without your light,
I care not to Fight.
Not for Love,
Not for Life,
Not for Anything.

Go Ahead,
Leave me Now,
Though you go,
Know this,
Without you,
I am Nothing.
Without you,
I will Die.

But you go and leave Me,
Do not look to ever see Me,
For I am now going to Die.
Alone.
Without your Love,
To keep me Alive. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 22 [informant] => EddieDean [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Need You

Contributed by EddieDean on Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 12:59:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

So,
You want to leave?
Go ahead,
I'll live for now,
Some how...

I need your Love,
But you turn away from Me.
Now I am Alone,
Completely.

My Heart grows dark,
Without your light,
I care not to Fight.
Not for Love,
Not for Life,
Not for Anything.

Go Ahead,
Leave me Now,
Though you go,
Know this,
Without you,
I am Nothing.
Without you,
I will Die.

But you go and leave Me,
Do not look to ever see Me,
For I am now going to Die.
Alone.
Without your Love,
To keep me Alive.

Copyright © EddieDean ... [ 2006-11-18 12:59:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Need You (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 06:04:28 PM AEST
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sad and moving, nicely done!

wiz

Re: I Need You (User Rating: 1 )
by MandiLee on Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 07:24:32 PM AEST
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its so beautiful simple and yet emotional! and wow you r amazing u captured the emotion in this poem!

Re: I Need You (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 06:02:09 PM AEST
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A sad and very moving piece of poetry you have here. I'm so sorry this happened to you.
I hope things are much better for you now~
Take care
hugs n prayers,
sue m

Re: I Need You (User Rating: 1 )
by MandiLee on Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 09:37:34 AM AEST
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this poem is magical i love it!! I will be sure to read it again next weekend im kind of worried about next week, but thats ok i will probably have a knew poem about my soap box, well i would be messaging you on myspace but I'm at school and they block that site and i can't think of how to break the code to get on it! so i will when i get home! but i really do love this poem it hits home, you shot and you scored! lol so i guess i will talk to you later!

love,
mandi

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