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Array ( [sid] => 128373 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my love is yours to borrow [time] => 2006-11-17 22:51:14 [hometext] => ... [bodytext] => our hot sweaty bodys
sticking to the leather seat
moving closer and closer
until our lips meet

your hands feels warm
and you place them on my waist
you kiss me softly
and tell me directly to my face

you tell me we have to stop
although the temptation made it hard
you said it wasnt my fault
you just promised yourself from the start

you said " i dont think your ready,
and thats ok.
and even though your not,
im still here to stay."

i sat up
and drew a heart in the fog
and thats when i relized
there is more to you than i thought

you have a heart full of wonder
and a mind full of sorrow
and just so you know
my love is yours to borrow [comments] => 1 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 2 [informant] => blindchoice [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

my love is yours to borrow

Contributed by blindchoice on Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 10:51:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

our hot sweaty bodys
sticking to the leather seat
moving closer and closer
until our lips meet

your hands feels warm
and you place them on my waist
you kiss me softly
and tell me directly to my face

you tell me we have to stop
although the temptation made it hard
you said it wasnt my fault
you just promised yourself from the start

you said " i dont think your ready,
and thats ok.
and even though your not,
im still here to stay."

i sat up
and drew a heart in the fog
and thats when i relized
there is more to you than i thought

you have a heart full of wonder
and a mind full of sorrow
and just so you know
my love is yours to borrow

Copyright © blindchoice ... [ 2006-11-17 22:51:14]
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Re: my love is yours to borrow (User Rating: 1 )
by silver_crested_shadow on Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 11:51:30 PM AEST
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awsome, i loved the layout of this poem and to me at the begining it seemed like a different kind of poem and it all changed within the last couple paragraphs, either way i still enjoyed reading it.

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