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Array ( [sid] => 128371 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Liar [time] => 2006-11-17 20:00:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A whisper in the wind, a tear freshly fallen.
Shows the hope lost in our hearts.
We looked for hope in the words you spoke.
But no, the tear splatters. Of desperation we speak,
of lies you reek. A word of solace
and in an instant we believe. Our heart fills the hope we've lost. Our eyes alight our hopes a flight.
No, to the dirt they go dashed and trampled. Again we go plummeting in sorrow. Anger swells and hatred burns.
Refusing to be beat we fight the tears
and throw you in the heat. No more
will we seek your solace or your lies. As my hope spews forth
and my mind steadies its state
I'm filled with blind hate. Another
question thrown into the darkness of the night,
grasping at the thought of triumph.
Triumph over evil, triumph over wrong, triumph over you. Screaming, "I hate your evil, I hate your lies, I hate your wrongs,
I hate the pain you cause." No more will you will me, my fate is mine and my hate is yours.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 6 [informant] => KiSwaters [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Liar

Contributed by KiSwaters on Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 08:00:52 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

A whisper in the wind, a tear freshly fallen.
Shows the hope lost in our hearts.
We looked for hope in the words you spoke.
But no, the tear splatters. Of desperation we speak,
of lies you reek. A word of solace
and in an instant we believe. Our heart fills the hope we've lost. Our eyes alight our hopes a flight.
No, to the dirt they go dashed and trampled. Again we go plummeting in sorrow. Anger swells and hatred burns.
Refusing to be beat we fight the tears
and throw you in the heat. No more
will we seek your solace or your lies. As my hope spews forth
and my mind steadies its state
I'm filled with blind hate. Another
question thrown into the darkness of the night,
grasping at the thought of triumph.
Triumph over evil, triumph over wrong, triumph over you. Screaming, "I hate your evil, I hate your lies, I hate your wrongs,
I hate the pain you cause." No more will you will me, my fate is mine and my hate is yours.

Copyright © KiSwaters ... [ 2006-11-17 20:00:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Liar (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 12:50:33 AM AEST
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awesome write, your anger flows through nicely...the last two lines are an awesome summation of your feelings..

wiz

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