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Array ( [sid] => 128366 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Longing to be a Legend III [time] => 2006-11-17 17:32:58 [hometext] => Welcome back to those who read parts I & II... [bodytext] => ~
Whistling into the darkening twilight~

to dispel the unsettling silence

The boys tune was cut short, caught in his throat~

against which now lay the promise of violence...


The hot rotten breath so close to his ear~

reeked of spirits so strong, his eyes watered

And when down his leg fears self had escaped~

bright with shame his face grew even hotter...
~

To be continued... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 31 [informant] => MisfitMe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
Longing to be a Legend III

Contributed by MisfitMe on Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 05:32:58 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



~
Whistling into the darkening twilight~

to dispel the unsettling silence

The boys tune was cut short, caught in his throat~

against which now lay the promise of violence...


The hot rotten breath so close to his ear~

reeked of spirits so strong, his eyes watered

And when down his leg fears self had escaped~

bright with shame his face grew even hotter...
~

To be continued...




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Re: Longing to be a Legend III (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 05:58:18 PM AEST
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I am enjoying it so far. I'll keep an eye
out for the rest. Hope to see it soon.
truly , doug


Re: Longing to be a Legend III (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 03:20:15 PM AEST
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me 3

I do question is this a memory coming back to you in pieces?

Good jub

Here's to clear thinking and total recall...

Peace
Yang


Re: Longing to be a Legend III (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 12:09:35 PM AEST
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Just a little niblet here, Kerry. To be so scared you pee yourself, damn that's scared. What a rotten predicament the young man is in now. Your story writing skills are very impressive.
Peace, Laura


Re: Longing to be a Legend III (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 01:36:16 PM AEST
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Count on me 2 be at the continuance. A beautiful and perfect ending . . .


Ben




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