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Array ( [sid] => 128348 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Complications [time] => 2006-11-17 11:44:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => COMPLICATIONS...
Thoughts filtering through fingertips
no understanding
standing alone

ALONE

pain Rattles the body

HEARTACHE and shocK.

Words spoken softly scream the loudest

SCREAMS}}}

no good
No Good
i'm No good
for
you
.
.
.
or me.

this prick here

[EMPTY SPACE]

will hurt me more
than it will you
baby doll.
trust me,
trust is dead.

I'm a living,
breathing,
blemish on the face of society.
DON'T!
tell
me
how I...I should feel.
It's none of your buisness anyway...
anyway, anyway ANY WAY

All this is ignored,
by him
them.

LIES!
Let me tell you about lies.
"BREATH COMES OUT WHITE CLOUDS WITH YOUR LIES."
How true baby...how true.

NAKED ***** in my bedroom
you're the one for me baby...
all I ever wanted, oh yea.
shifty eyes and DEEP swallows
spitting sounds on the walls
COME to ME and insert pain

(HERE)

We both know, I'm just your convienient
movie line
the epitomy
of everything

I've
ever

wanted.

I never expected you to understand anyway.
The way you shattered my heart
and left me to clean up the mess.
~Rhiannon
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Uncertain_Oblivion [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Complications

Contributed by Uncertain_Oblivion on Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 11:44:04 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

COMPLICATIONS...
Thoughts filtering through fingertips
no understanding
standing alone

ALONE

pain Rattles the body

HEARTACHE and shocK.

Words spoken softly scream the loudest

SCREAMS}}}

no good
No Good
i'm No good
for
you
.
.
.
or me.

this prick here

[EMPTY SPACE]

will hurt me more
than it will you
baby doll.
trust me,
trust is dead.

I'm a living,
breathing,
blemish on the face of society.
DON'T!
tell
me
how I...I should feel.
It's none of your buisness anyway...
anyway, anyway ANY WAY

All this is ignored,
by him
them.

LIES!
Let me tell you about lies.
"BREATH COMES OUT WHITE CLOUDS WITH YOUR LIES."
How true baby...how true.

NAKED ***** in my bedroom
you're the one for me baby...
all I ever wanted, oh yea.
shifty eyes and DEEP swallows
spitting sounds on the walls
COME to ME and insert pain

(HERE)

We both know, I'm just your convienient
movie line
the epitomy
of everything

I've
ever

wanted.

I never expected you to understand anyway.
The way you shattered my heart
and left me to clean up the mess.
~Rhiannon

Copyright © Uncertain_Oblivion ... [ 2006-11-17 11:44:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Complications (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 01:25:55 AM AEST
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Holy hell there Rhiannon, that blew me away. I felt like you were reading it to me. I could hear your voice loud and clear. The emotions were almost palpable. (echos of me here) You can touch the rawest nerve, the most inner core of things. I love you for it, sis. Excellent, excellent read. I think I'm a little tachycardic now. LOL
Peace and hugs,
Laura

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