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Array ( [sid] => 128339 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => As You Fall (I Hope You Feel This Pain) [time] => 2006-11-17 02:26:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Tast the blood tonight
Feel the rage
As you fall into your empty pit
Remember when I loved you?
Remember when you turned me down?
(Tast the blood tonight)
(Feel the rage,
As you make yourself fall,
into your empty pit)
Do you even remember me?
I was the one who cared the most
(I was the one who cared...)

As you fall into your empty pit
Remember it was me
Remember it was me who cared
Just blame yourself
For your choices
You have no one left
As you fall into your pit

Tast the blood tonight
Feel the rage
Learn to live with past mitakes
Remember when
You turned my love away?
Do you remember
When I loved you?
I don't want to be second picked
You have no one left
As you fall
You have no one left!

I loved you
But you turned me down
Then once you got turned away
You came to me
(I don't appreciate this false love)
You have no one left
(After what you did...
No one wants you now)
You have no one left,
No one left at all!!

As you fall
Into your pit
Taste the blood and feel the rage
You have no one left
As you fall into your empty pit
(No one left at all)

As you fall
You take a part of me away
A part I don't want back
Remember when I loved you?
Do you remember when
You turned me down?
I don't like to think
This is all because of you
Like its all your fault

So as I tell you this
I hope you feel this pain
Hope you can taste this
Bloody nightmare
I hope you can feel this rage
As you fall into this pit
This pit you dug
This shallow grave you dug yourself
With your own two hands

So let us talk about romance
Romance is dead
This idea of love
Sending away roses of red
covered with slashes of red from your wrist
This idea of love. This romance...
Romance is dead
(Roses of red, covered in blood,
blood from me to you. So that you can have a part of me.)

(Take these roses,
place them by your heart,
I drained out my heart and soul,
just to send them to you)

As you fall into your pit
I watch from a distance
At first I wondered why
Then I remembered the pain
The pain you must feel
The pain you made me feel!
(So as the wind wisperes in your ear
Remember I loved you
And how we turned eachother down,
I hope you feel this pain
Hope you can taste this
Bloody nightmare
I hope you can feel the rage
As you fall into this grave you dug
The shallow grave you dug yourself
with your own two hands)

Romance is dead
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I send these roses,
I send you my heart and soul
Now I send you these violets,
I send you my body
Romance is dead!
(So fall into your empty pit!
No one is left
And romance is dead
This thing we call love...
I hope you feel this pain,
As you fall into your empty pit) [comments] => 1 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 34 [informant] => The_Unknown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
As You Fall (I Hope You Feel This Pain)

Contributed by The_Unknown on Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 02:26:20 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Tast the blood tonight
Feel the rage
As you fall into your empty pit
Remember when I loved you?
Remember when you turned me down?
(Tast the blood tonight)
(Feel the rage,
As you make yourself fall,
into your empty pit)
Do you even remember me?
I was the one who cared the most
(I was the one who cared...)

As you fall into your empty pit
Remember it was me
Remember it was me who cared
Just blame yourself
For your choices
You have no one left
As you fall into your pit

Tast the blood tonight
Feel the rage
Learn to live with past mitakes
Remember when
You turned my love away?
Do you remember
When I loved you?
I don't want to be second picked
You have no one left
As you fall
You have no one left!

I loved you
But you turned me down
Then once you got turned away
You came to me
(I don't appreciate this false love)
You have no one left
(After what you did...
No one wants you now)
You have no one left,
No one left at all!!

As you fall
Into your pit
Taste the blood and feel the rage
You have no one left
As you fall into your empty pit
(No one left at all)

As you fall
You take a part of me away
A part I don't want back
Remember when I loved you?
Do you remember when
You turned me down?
I don't like to think
This is all because of you
Like its all your fault

So as I tell you this
I hope you feel this pain
Hope you can taste this
Bloody nightmare
I hope you can feel this rage
As you fall into this pit
This pit you dug
This shallow grave you dug yourself
With your own two hands

So let us talk about romance
Romance is dead
This idea of love
Sending away roses of red
covered with slashes of red from your wrist
This idea of love. This romance...
Romance is dead
(Roses of red, covered in blood,
blood from me to you. So that you can have a part of me.)

(Take these roses,
place them by your heart,
I drained out my heart and soul,
just to send them to you)

As you fall into your pit
I watch from a distance
At first I wondered why
Then I remembered the pain
The pain you must feel
The pain you made me feel!
(So as the wind wisperes in your ear
Remember I loved you
And how we turned eachother down,
I hope you feel this pain
Hope you can taste this
Bloody nightmare
I hope you can feel the rage
As you fall into this grave you dug
The shallow grave you dug yourself
with your own two hands)

Romance is dead
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I send these roses,
I send you my heart and soul
Now I send you these violets,
I send you my body
Romance is dead!
(So fall into your empty pit!
No one is left
And romance is dead
This thing we call love...
I hope you feel this pain,
As you fall into your empty pit)




Copyright © The_Unknown ... [ 2006-11-17 02:26:20]
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Re: As You Fall (I Hope You Feel This Pain) (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 03:15:13 PM AEST
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nice lyrics.. i like the flow of this.. alot of people can relate to this piece and its true in alot of ways. it puts into words an emotion we all have at some point felt before.. awesome job

JENNI




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