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Array ( [sid] => 128333 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Suicide [time] => 2006-11-16 23:26:21 [hometext] => Nothin all that special I guess, but it's what came out and it fits this particular situation in my life so well... [bodytext] => Love Suicide, Cast all truth aside
In her heart she died, a prisoner of tonight
She called his name out the down stairs window
he didn't glance back just dissapeared under the moon glow

Love crucified began under the moonlight
in her soul still a prisoner of that night
they drown in the waters holding on to eachother tight
they took their last breaths and kissed under the dark night sky

And only the sky would know, the secret they shared they would never let go
but now the only kiss he gave her was a kiss good-bye
then tears fell from her eyes...

He'd been reborn tonight, on the bed where she died of an overdose
she took his poison straight to the heart
He couldn't bring her back to life
He wears the heart she let him steal from her on a silver chain around his neck
and left her livin in the past, while he started over with no regrets

And only the sky would know, the secret she held that she had to let go
and now the only word she has is just "good-bye"
then tears fell from the sky... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 22 [informant] => sour_gurl67 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Love Suicide

Contributed by sour_gurl67 on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 11:26:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Love Suicide, Cast all truth aside
In her heart she died, a prisoner of tonight
She called his name out the down stairs window
he didn't glance back just dissapeared under the moon glow

Love crucified began under the moonlight
in her soul still a prisoner of that night
they drown in the waters holding on to eachother tight
they took their last breaths and kissed under the dark night sky

And only the sky would know, the secret they shared they would never let go
but now the only kiss he gave her was a kiss good-bye
then tears fell from her eyes...

He'd been reborn tonight, on the bed where she died of an overdose
she took his poison straight to the heart
He couldn't bring her back to life
He wears the heart she let him steal from her on a silver chain around his neck
and left her livin in the past, while he started over with no regrets

And only the sky would know, the secret she held that she had to let go
and now the only word she has is just "good-bye"
then tears fell from the sky...

Copyright © sour_gurl67 ... [ 2006-11-16 23:26:21]
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Re: Love Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 10:05:52 AM AEST
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" He wears the heart she let him steal from her on a silver chain around his neck
and left her livin in the past, while he started over with no regrets. " This is so sad and unfortunately quite a reoccurance in this day and age. beautifully writtien nice style. hope thing;s get better for you .

Ben

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