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Array ( [sid] => 128297 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => nothing works right when its broken [time] => 2006-11-16 09:00:04 [hometext] => this poem is about a broken heart [bodytext] => why do i continue trying to love you,
i cant give you my whole heart,
it still belongs to him,
i am so selfish,
i say i love you,
which is true,
but how can i love you when i cant give whats needed to you,
you deserve better than me,
someone who can give you there all,
but right now i cant,
i continue to fall,
i keep trying to move forward but i run into this brick wall,
i try to knock it down but it wont budge,
can someone help me give me a push or a nudge,
i scream out for help but its like my words are unspoken,
who am i kidding i cant love you hearts dont work when they are broken. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 2 [informant] => myloveispure [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

nothing works right when its broken

Contributed by myloveispure on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 09:00:04 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

why do i continue trying to love you,
i cant give you my whole heart,
it still belongs to him,
i am so selfish,
i say i love you,
which is true,
but how can i love you when i cant give whats needed to you,
you deserve better than me,
someone who can give you there all,
but right now i cant,
i continue to fall,
i keep trying to move forward but i run into this brick wall,
i try to knock it down but it wont budge,
can someone help me give me a push or a nudge,
i scream out for help but its like my words are unspoken,
who am i kidding i cant love you hearts dont work when they are broken.

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Re: nothing works right when its broken (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 10:11:37 AM AEST
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This is a really good poem, I can relate. Infact, that's exactly what's going on right now...
luvs ya
.::Jess::.

Re: nothing works right when its broken (User Rating: 1 )
by kalbime_aldin on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 10:20:09 AM AEST
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i love this and i know how you feel nothing is ever right when your heart is broken or well nothing really works when its broken Nikki

Re: nothing works right when its broken (User Rating: 1 )
by recklessguy on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 12:06:45 PM AEST
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good write, be true to you.

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