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Suicidal Prayer
Contributed by
Shadows_In_The_Darkness
on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 11:07:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Now I lay me down to sleep,
I know my soul the Lord will not keep.
If I should die I will not wake,
I know my soul the Lord will not take.
Guard me while I take my journey tonight,
And wake me tortured in Hells eternal night.
After these pills my eyes will finally close,
Finish off this bottle for my overdose.
You can try and pray to save my soul,
But God wont save those with death as a goal.
Hell is where I will lay to rest,
They will all know I was depressed.
Darkness will be my only light,
Im sorry but I just couldnt keep up the fight.
Ill rest somewhere deep where its always cold,
Dont ever say you werent told.
Its time to put an end to all the *****,
All I need is one more slit.
Memories come in black and white,
Telling me my decision is right.
No more day, no more pretend, no more sun,
I cant keep faking this, Im done.
Satan, take me with the chains you use to hold me,
All I want is to finally be free.
Free from pain, free from loss, free from hate,
I need it all to end, so now I lay in wait.
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2006-11-15 23:07:28]
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Re: Suicidal Prayer
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 11:30:29 PM AEST
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Very sad, especially since suicide is running rapid on this Planet/
prayer,
emy |
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Re: Suicidal Prayer
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by tearstained_soul on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 01:18:38 AM AEST
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this poem is beautiful... yes i know its about suicide but the way you wrote it.... definatly WOW wrthy, though i do hope you're still alive to read my words and anyone else who've left a comment to praise you b/c there is no denying... this is a good poem. keep rockin and writing babe (but do me a favor andstay alive) :)
britt |
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Re: Suicidal Prayer
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by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 01:40:47 AM AEST
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| brilliant of course, like the rest. this is the fifth suicide one you've posted, though i'm sure thats not news to you. i'm just wondering right now whether or not you've got children.... |
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Re: Suicidal Prayer
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by a7x36 on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 09:50:44 PM AEST
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i rlly like how this is written, especially the beginning
favorite line: But God won’t save those with death as a goal.
i've had the same thoughts myself, i rlly feel for you
God bless |
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Re: Suicidal Prayer
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by midsummerdream on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 06:44:53 PM AEST
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| wow thats really deep its awesome |
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Re: Suicidal Prayer
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by MemeCaroline on
Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 07:15:10 PM AEST
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| You have poetic talent. My heart goes out to you because of your pain. I will keep you in my prayers. |
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