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Array ( [sid] => 128247 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life [time] => 2006-11-15 13:36:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Heartache, heartbreak,
two words that no one wants to hear.
Pain pouring out from the inner side,
like a flame than engulfs those around.
Cries and wailing fill the air,
with the eerie sounds of torment and death.
Dark clouds cover the skies,
the thunder booms in the air,
lightning flashes from one side to another.
More cries, more death still being heard around you.
You feel empty inside,
like the cool hand of the Grim has taken ahold of you.
What is the meaning of this?
You scream with a thousand breaths,
your lungs are burning with the hatred of them.
You have no fear in your eyes,
but your heart trembles at the sight before you.
This is the reality that has been forseen.
Now, you will live it.

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Life

Contributed by whiteleo1984 on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 01:36:36 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Heartache, heartbreak,
two words that no one wants to hear.
Pain pouring out from the inner side,
like a flame than engulfs those around.
Cries and wailing fill the air,
with the eerie sounds of torment and death.
Dark clouds cover the skies,
the thunder booms in the air,
lightning flashes from one side to another.
More cries, more death still being heard around you.
You feel empty inside,
like the cool hand of the Grim has taken ahold of you.
What is the meaning of this?
You scream with a thousand breaths,
your lungs are burning with the hatred of them.
You have no fear in your eyes,
but your heart trembles at the sight before you.
This is the reality that has been forseen.
Now, you will live it.

Copyright © whiteleo1984 ... [ 2006-11-15 13:36:36]
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Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by trackiller2006 on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 05:39:24 PM AEST
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Very nice. I enjoy the aspects of life when it is put like this.

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