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But everytime I hear your name,

Or hear your voice

I can feel a smile forming

on my face.

I can't get enough of you

I want you in my arms holding me tight

then moving in for the

Movie perfect kiss.

In the middle of

A crowded room

But all that exist

In that moment

is me, you, and a kiss.
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Movie Perfect Kiss

Contributed by MandiLee on Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 08:48:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I just met you,

But everytime I hear your name,

Or hear your voice

I can feel a smile forming

on my face.

I can't get enough of you

I want you in my arms holding me tight

then moving in for the

Movie perfect kiss.

In the middle of

A crowded room

But all that exist

In that moment

is me, you, and a kiss.

Copyright © MandiLee ... [ 2006-11-14 20:48:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Movie Perfect Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 09:22:59 PM AEST
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its cute and sweet, but it doesnt quite capture the emotion of love. Like i SEE the love but i can't FEEL the love. Capture that emotion! show us all how much Austin really means to you! good! now make it a great! ashley :-)

Re: Movie Perfect Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by ruby_dreamer on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 02:11:11 AM AEST
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Describe to me a movie kiss...what makes it that perfect, that surreal? A very sweet poem, but I can see it more as a paragraph in a love letter than a poem trying to capture the essence of love. But I like it! ^^

Re: Movie Perfect Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 02:09:41 PM AEST
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Mandi-

Im glad to see that you have someone in your life that means so much to you. You really show it in this poem, its very touching and a powerful write.

Eddie Dean

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