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Array ( [sid] => 128209 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For Entertainment Purposes Only [time] => 2006-11-14 15:07:12 [hometext] => After reading these words I had a wonderful feeling that we flourish for at least the next ten thousand years. [bodytext] => Count with me...
and feel your eyelids
grow heavy..8, 9, 10...sleep

Flap your arms
you're a rooster
crow at the sun...

Laughter howling,

Open your eyes
the audience is naked...

Embarrassed but peeking

Let's begin with a Past Life Regression:

Feel yourself falling

down and back in time,

past your labors and endeavors

back before your birth,

feel your cells vibrate

go deeper and remember...

Please speak tell us where you are?

Thick tongued with lisp:

"I'm lying near a pond...
there is a tree at my back
mountains in the distance;
the air looks
pristine and calm
I am on a blanket
made from something shiny and warm...

There is a buzz in my head as I talk, laugh and cry
with millions
sharing my heart in constant verse and song.

Oh my god I am a woman who is about to give birth...

Push so familiar as I press down
there is no pain to expect
the only hurt comes from knowing,
a haunting feeling
of emptiness
this little one about to be born
will no longer be within my soul...

Breathe,
push, harder
and he spills out from me as I squat
my hands raise him up
wiping vernix from his eyes, nose and mouth,
he wails 'I'm alive' with a newborn cry...
quietly I shush, coo, pressing
my abdomen to cradle him rocking.

I scoot with my 'glutes'
until we are in the water.
Washing, bonding I clench the umbilicus,
hand clamped while I reach for a salve;
a ancient hatred for knives waxes,
as the pungent oils eat
separating the cord to a floret,
my child will likely have an 'outtie.'

One more push for placental release.
Quietly I wait until deep he sleeps...

Then something floats in from overhead
I hear myself saying 'robo-med'
and we are all scooped up
transported inside a vessel that
flys fast above the sky
as the voices within
anxiously awaits our new star..."

OK softly now wake
remember everything clearly ,
feeling refreshed and invigorated ,
1, 2, 3 eyes open wide.

Hmm
Your past life has many implications...
as the audience cheers and applauds
stomping for an encore.



AJPIII [comments] => 6 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 19 [informant] => yangdantien [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
For Entertainment Purposes Only

Contributed by yangdantien on Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 03:07:12 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



Count with me...
and feel your eyelids
grow heavy..8, 9, 10...sleep

Flap your arms
you're a rooster
crow at the sun...

Laughter howling,

Open your eyes
the audience is naked...

Embarrassed but peeking

Let's begin with a Past Life Regression:

Feel yourself falling

down and back in time,

past your labors and endeavors

back before your birth,

feel your cells vibrate

go deeper and remember...

Please speak tell us where you are?

Thick tongued with lisp:

"I'm lying near a pond...
there is a tree at my back
mountains in the distance;
the air looks
pristine and calm
I am on a blanket
made from something shiny and warm...

There is a buzz in my head as I talk, laugh and cry
with millions
sharing my heart in constant verse and song.

Oh my god I am a woman who is about to give birth...

Push so familiar as I press down
there is no pain to expect
the only hurt comes from knowing,
a haunting feeling
of emptiness
this little one about to be born
will no longer be within my soul...

Breathe,
push, harder
and he spills out from me as I squat
my hands raise him up
wiping vernix from his eyes, nose and mouth,
he wails 'I'm alive' with a newborn cry...
quietly I shush, coo, pressing
my abdomen to cradle him rocking.

I scoot with my 'glutes'
until we are in the water.
Washing, bonding I clench the umbilicus,
hand clamped while I reach for a salve;
a ancient hatred for knives waxes,
as the pungent oils eat
separating the cord to a floret,
my child will likely have an 'outtie.'

One more push for placental release.
Quietly I wait until deep he sleeps...

Then something floats in from overhead
I hear myself saying 'robo-med'
and we are all scooped up
transported inside a vessel that
flys fast above the sky
as the voices within
anxiously awaits our new star..."

OK softly now wake
remember everything clearly ,
feeling refreshed and invigorated ,
1, 2, 3 eyes open wide.

Hmm
Your past life has many implications...
as the audience cheers and applauds
stomping for an encore.



AJPIII




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Re: For Entertainment Purposes Only (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 04:37:14 PM AEST
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I love the segue into & out from the meat of this write & as you already know my once & future selves are quite intrigued w/ this topic matter.But above & beyond my innate interest in the concept, I'm very impressed by the style & format you created here...which provided more than enough context to enjoy the story~telling held within.


As always...you give good vibe, brother of mine!

BigLoveMuchPeace,
MisfitMe


Re: For Entertainment Purposes Only (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 11:14:40 PM AEST
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the word depth does not do this justice.

I loved the counting backwards then the multitude of building.

Loved the very end, your past has many implications....

I'm lacking in choice comment tonight forgive me for that... Brain is a bit loaded, ahh yes past implications....

~Michelle~


Re: For Entertainment Purposes Only (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 02:37:39 PM AEST
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Ahhh Andrew, you truly do amaze me the hell out of me. What an interesting dream time experience. Birth..a beginning, and one hell of a wondrous event. Exquisitely written, my friend.
Peace and hugs,
Laura


Re: For Entertainment Purposes Only (User Rating: 1 )
by Ratwick on Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 01:01:19 AM AEST
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And what an entertaining journey this poem takes you on! Its fascinating, such interesting imagery! Another Thanks for posting this! and youve earnd youre=self another fan!
Write On!
Peace


Re: For Entertainment Purposes Only (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 09:48:34 AM AEST
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Now this was an amazing....write, of a dream that gave you the whole effect, yet.....its was just a dream. I do wished we could all close out eyes and make the dream effect 100% true reality..(in a differ case sceniro, tho)....Absoulutely incediable.....


Brew~


Re: For Entertainment Purposes Only (User Rating: 1 )
by feralpen on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 05:58:11 PM AEST
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Surreal, induced by chakra, or a product of very deep thought, this write is a unique combining of contemporary ideals, ancient wisdom and futuristic fantasy. You set the story up oh so nicely with the assistance of your trancendentalist. I found much humor here. Was the babe a birth, or a re-birth?




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