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"Bless you, my child~

with your ever so sweet & pure white skin"

"Forgive me, father~

for questioning if what we share is sin"

"Blessed can only be the youth~

that by my love is not wasted"

"Forgive in me the temptation~

born to be touched & tasted"

"Blessing of you, I, ask for~

in the same way as food I eat"

"Forgive my part as a tool used~

by the demons you must defeat"

"Blessed are you for this silent burden~

about which none you tell"

"Forgiven by you, good father~

& saved is my soul from hell..."

Blessing such as known by these children~

most of us can't face

While forgiveness dies unknown~

in those old enough to be replaced...

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Bless You Father...For You Have Sinned

Contributed by MisfitMe on Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 12:10:11 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

"Bless you, my child~

with your ever so sweet & pure white skin"

"Forgive me, father~

for questioning if what we share is sin"

"Blessed can only be the youth~

that by my love is not wasted"

"Forgive in me the temptation~

born to be touched & tasted"

"Blessing of you, I, ask for~

in the same way as food I eat"

"Forgive my part as a tool used~

by the demons you must defeat"

"Blessed are you for this silent burden~

about which none you tell"

"Forgiven by you, good father~

& saved is my soul from hell..."

Blessing such as known by these children~

most of us can't face

While forgiveness dies unknown~

in those old enough to be replaced...

Copyright © MisfitMe ... [ 2006-11-14 12:10:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Bless You Father...For You Have Sinned (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 12:35:05 PM AEST
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very dark indeed. nice write though.

Re: Bless You Father...For You Have Sinned (User Rating: 1 )
by richcol7522 on Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 12:58:25 PM AEST
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It was indeed very dark but it was very deep too. You did a very good job in writing this. I liked it alot. Keep up the good work.

Rich

Re: Bless You Father...For You Have Sinned (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 03:50:42 PM AEST
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I hope the above post is removed as the uncouth would post spam for poker links in what is a very serious piece.
As if this piece represents the spammers demographic cause once born a Roman Catholic and still recovering I might add
I found my self drunk doing crack
I found myself losing all my money at the track,
I found myself with a needle in panic park,
I find myself on my knees blowin a john

and then I go to confession and its all absolved
except for the aids in my veins and 'the pains of hell'-ish living

Forgive me the spammer unhinged me...

Your work is growing teeth
I hear your yawp as you sing the body electric and bravely eat the apple first...

Blessed Be
My Sweet

AJPIII

Re: Bless You Father...For You Have Sinned (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 01:50:10 AM AEST
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This is a very good piece. You did a great job, keep it up ;)
.::Jess::.

Re: Bless You Father...For You Have Sinned (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 02:46:18 PM AEST
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Kerry, This was such a haunting write. OMFG it literally tore at me. What crap is put on us by other's sick desires. It angers me, it saddens me. This piece is like a raw nerve, being stroked again and again. Very moving. Some dark things need to be brought to light. Well written.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

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