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Array ( [sid] => 128098 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => road to recovery [time] => 2006-11-12 03:39:13 [hometext] => im still waiting for this to happen to me.... [bodytext] => I dwindle on the edge of daftness
but in my mind im perfectly sain.
By so many i've been cozen,
by I am all I blaim.

I believed their lies so the fault is mine
punish me god as you wish.
depleat me of my soul, my heart
snatch me from abliss.

excruciating pain enters my heart
my sanity's decending
the spark once brilliant inside my eyes is dull
i'm distant and half unliving.

my thoughts are in a jumble
one runs into another
my soul knows not whether to stay or leave
for it, life and death battle eachother.

I've lost insight of who i am
and who i want to be
my mind doesnt know that it's corrupted
and my eyes refuse to see.

Inside i might as well be dormant
my hearts as cold as ice
outside is a mirror image of how i feel
though i try desperstly to muffle my cries.

I cant just let myslef die
i've got a future that could by happy and long
for now i am still extant
and death just seems so wrong.

SO peice by peice i'm stitched back together
my sanity is more intact
slowly im recovering my scenses
the knowing of who i am, i no longer lack.

i will throw away my troubles
peel away my dispare
gladly think i made it through
with full knolage that is rare.

slowly opening my eyes,
the fog lifts from inside
my heart and souol brighten
ready for a second chance in life. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 61 [informant] => tearstained_soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
road to recovery

Contributed by tearstained_soul on Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 03:39:13 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



I dwindle on the edge of daftness
but in my mind im perfectly sain.
By so many i've been cozen,
by I am all I blaim.

I believed their lies so the fault is mine
punish me god as you wish.
depleat me of my soul, my heart
snatch me from abliss.

excruciating pain enters my heart
my sanity's decending
the spark once brilliant inside my eyes is dull
i'm distant and half unliving.

my thoughts are in a jumble
one runs into another
my soul knows not whether to stay or leave
for it, life and death battle eachother.

I've lost insight of who i am
and who i want to be
my mind doesnt know that it's corrupted
and my eyes refuse to see.

Inside i might as well be dormant
my hearts as cold as ice
outside is a mirror image of how i feel
though i try desperstly to muffle my cries.

I cant just let myslef die
i've got a future that could by happy and long
for now i am still extant
and death just seems so wrong.

SO peice by peice i'm stitched back together
my sanity is more intact
slowly im recovering my scenses
the knowing of who i am, i no longer lack.

i will throw away my troubles
peel away my dispare
gladly think i made it through
with full knolage that is rare.

slowly opening my eyes,
the fog lifts from inside
my heart and souol brighten
ready for a second chance in life.




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Re: road to recovery (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 04:10:03 PM AEST
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Right on! There's so much feeling here. Keep the prize in sight. If you can imagine this place, your half the way there...I know, because, I've actually realized this place for myself & its even more glorious in truth than concept. Actualize this reality & couple it with your obvious raw talent for expression....& wow, what incredible beauty I can foresee...


BigLoveMuchPeace,
MisfitMe


Re: road to recovery (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 04:01:40 PM AEST
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wow!

another magnificent piece from you.

keep it up.




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