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Array ( [sid] => 128086 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => confused cutter [time] => 2006-11-11 22:02:40 [hometext] => dedicated to:: everyone and everything that broke me down [bodytext] => Do I or dont I
sink this blad into my skin?
Do I or don't I
begain the pain again?

Should I or shouldn't I
ignore the objection inside?
Sould I or shouldn't I
cut so deep I cry?

Can I or can't I
deal with the pain I feel?
Can I or can't I
let my soul and body heal?

Will I or won't I
cut to deep one day?
Will I or won't I
use this blade to dig my grave? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 13 [informant] => tearstained_soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

confused cutter

Contributed by tearstained_soul on Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 10:02:40 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Do I or dont I
sink this blad into my skin?
Do I or don't I
begain the pain again?

Should I or shouldn't I
ignore the objection inside?
Sould I or shouldn't I
cut so deep I cry?

Can I or can't I
deal with the pain I feel?
Can I or can't I
let my soul and body heal?

Will I or won't I
cut to deep one day?
Will I or won't I
use this blade to dig my grave?

Copyright © tearstained_soul ... [ 2006-11-11 22:02:40]
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Re: confused cutter (User Rating: 1 )
by blindchoice on Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 10:09:52 PM AEST
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i loved it. i can really relate to it. really. and i can underestand your confusion. ive felt it too. keep it up. leme know what you think of mine!

Re: confused cutter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 10:44:51 PM AEST
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its deep...and if you are really in this situation..dont do it!!! you are too cool to die..i mean you did comment my poem and i thank you for that!
depressing..but that is what the feeling of the poem is so very good at expressing your feelings...maybe write a happier poem for your next piece!!
peace dude!
ashley

Re: confused cutter (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 06:15:19 AM AEST
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this is really good!

i self-harm too and understand completely where you're comming from.

the last stanza really got me. i guess it's what all us cutters fear the most when it comes to cutting to just find a simple release.
you always fear you'll kill your-self doing it one day but never think it will happen to you... good write!

Re: confused cutter (User Rating: 1 )
by twick on Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 12:46:51 PM AEST
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I thought this was simply good. Your heart was definitely in every line.

I hate when people do this but I can't help it this time. I have a poem Braille you might want to check out. I wrote it for one of my friends that is going through something similar.

Re: confused cutter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 02:34:38 PM AEST
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I ask the very same questions often. Very good poem!

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