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Wondering what happened to life and all the precious people in it, the ones that were so dear. I guess its my all fault for never really seeing, how the world really is that the world is really dark. This is the beginning and the end that's waits still in the core of hell, that some how came upon to be that sharp edges of earth are the four dead ends of grief, still laid here under this tree of once use to be rose pedals but now lay nothing more than twigs and all the death that sits here no more, somehow I won but now am alone, Final chapter was a wasted land where no one goes, no one dares to take a glance and look, there's no one left on earth and now there stays a little fate only to end back at the same tame gray place, never ever coming back, am so far away from getting back home, never ever coming home, If only I could see the place I've never seen before, oh how much I miss the treasury of once upon a time, its the beginning and the end, don't ever say hello because you have to say goodbye, I've always loved you and all always miss you. A tale in the beginning and a story in the end.
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The beginning and the end

Contributed by darkplace2 on Friday, 10th November 2006 @ 08:44:51 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The beginning and the end
Wondering what happened to life and all the precious people in it, the ones that were so dear. I guess its my all fault for never really seeing, how the world really is that the world is really dark. This is the beginning and the end that's waits still in the core of hell, that some how came upon to be that sharp edges of earth are the four dead ends of grief, still laid here under this tree of once use to be rose pedals but now lay nothing more than twigs and all the death that sits here no more, somehow I won but now am alone, Final chapter was a wasted land where no one goes, no one dares to take a glance and look, there's no one left on earth and now there stays a little fate only to end back at the same tame gray place, never ever coming back, am so far away from getting back home, never ever coming home, If only I could see the place I've never seen before, oh how much I miss the treasury of once upon a time, its the beginning and the end, don't ever say hello because you have to say goodbye, I've always loved you and all always miss you. A tale in the beginning and a story in the end.




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Re: The beginning and the end (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 07:35:54 AM AEST
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Home is easy to find, but sometimes misplaced. Once learned finding home for support helps when feeling like this.


Re: The beginning and the end (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 02:17:37 PM AEST
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This is a very beautiful piece of writing!




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