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Array ( [sid] => 128038 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You are destroying this [time] => 2006-11-10 07:40:30 [hometext] => He is blind to it all, and that is what makes this so unbelievably painful. He blind to it and even if he wasn't, he wouldn't care. [bodytext] => You won my heart, you made me feel alive again.
You turned on your charm, you cleansed my soul.
I have never felt so lucky as I did that beautiful day
The day you asked me to be yours
the day I slipped on that ring.

Oh how i loved you, everything about you
your smile, your touch, and your kiss.
I even loved the icy feel of your anger.
sometimes it was simply amusing.

Now it has been more then a year
and i feel that your throwing it away
I cannot comprehend your most recent ways
of destroying my happyness, my liveliness....

Your anger is bigger then all other emotions
your frowns are more often then your breaths
you want no kind of life, all you know is you want a kid.
your more annoyed with me then in love with me
and i just cannot understand.

I don't know if it is something i did
Or perhaps something i did not
But i feel like we are falling apart
Before we have even really begun.

I'm beginning to hate your tendancies
Your yells, your frowns, and all of your flaws
I don't feel loved anymore
honestly you are making me feel owned

Your blindness is what hurts the most,
I'm in so much pain, but you have no idea
yesterday, you asked me if i was awake
because you said that i seemed mad

mad, and half asleep are so different from eachother
how silly can you be.
i'm angry and upset, and you see the tears
but you ignore them, you ignore me

now, you sit at this computer every moment you have
you come find me to say that your hungry
and you come find when i have went to bed
when your ready to "make love"
only...it's not making love anymore
you find me when you want to ****...

This write i fear may turn vulger now
So i will end it here.
Maybe you will find me later
with a suitcase in my hand

I wonder if you will even notice
when i am gone
it might take till your hungry,
for food or something else
but i'm sure that then you'll notice
that you have thrown it all away
I only hope that you will care
and i hope you learn from this mistake
I hope the next one you win over
feels loved in every way
I can't believe you wanted me
as a simple security blanket.
I see that is why you proposed so quickly
you wanted something to hold onto.
you didn't really love me,
do you know how much that hurts?



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You are destroying this

Contributed by purplestary on Friday, 10th November 2006 @ 07:40:30 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You won my heart, you made me feel alive again.
You turned on your charm, you cleansed my soul.
I have never felt so lucky as I did that beautiful day
The day you asked me to be yours
the day I slipped on that ring.

Oh how i loved you, everything about you
your smile, your touch, and your kiss.
I even loved the icy feel of your anger.
sometimes it was simply amusing.

Now it has been more then a year
and i feel that your throwing it away
I cannot comprehend your most recent ways
of destroying my happyness, my liveliness....

Your anger is bigger then all other emotions
your frowns are more often then your breaths
you want no kind of life, all you know is you want a kid.
your more annoyed with me then in love with me
and i just cannot understand.

I don't know if it is something i did
Or perhaps something i did not
But i feel like we are falling apart
Before we have even really begun.

I'm beginning to hate your tendancies
Your yells, your frowns, and all of your flaws
I don't feel loved anymore
honestly you are making me feel owned

Your blindness is what hurts the most,
I'm in so much pain, but you have no idea
yesterday, you asked me if i was awake
because you said that i seemed mad

mad, and half asleep are so different from eachother
how silly can you be.
i'm angry and upset, and you see the tears
but you ignore them, you ignore me

now, you sit at this computer every moment you have
you come find me to say that your hungry
and you come find when i have went to bed
when your ready to "make love"
only...it's not making love anymore
you find me when you want to ****...

This write i fear may turn vulger now
So i will end it here.
Maybe you will find me later
with a suitcase in my hand

I wonder if you will even notice
when i am gone
it might take till your hungry,
for food or something else
but i'm sure that then you'll notice
that you have thrown it all away
I only hope that you will care
and i hope you learn from this mistake
I hope the next one you win over
feels loved in every way
I can't believe you wanted me
as a simple security blanket.
I see that is why you proposed so quickly
you wanted something to hold onto.
you didn't really love me,
do you know how much that hurts?







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Re: You are destroying this (User Rating: 1 )
by trackiller2006 on Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 05:32:13 PM AEST
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wow...that was deep. great write.


Re: You are destroying this (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 12:37:56 AM AEST
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This deffinately pack's a punch to say the least i like your stye btw, it's strong simple and to the point. And deffinately sincere.
well worth the reading as was the writting. i enjoyed reaing it. wow, the thing's that are right under our noses that we don't even know about. Keep up the good work.


Ben


Re: You are destroying this (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 03:37:59 AM AEST
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This had emotional impact for me personally.
I spent 4 years feeling this way and finally had to leave. I felt I wasn't even in the room when sharing space with my mate. Every other interest they had consumed them. I finally just felt lonely and invisible.I will never again enter any relationship without words, touch or equal sharing of soul. This was an excellent reminder to me....one never has to be alone unless they choose to be. My thanks again wonderful poet for your wisdom and sharing of inner self.




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