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That's you.
If a normal heart weighed fifty pounds
Yours would weigh two

Misjudgment
Delusion
Accident
Confusion

All you were
Was a big mistake
Here are some others
I hope someone makes

I hope you fall down
An endless flight of wooden stairs
And get spinters from your toes
Up to your hairs

I hope a lumberjack
Mistakes you for a tree
And chops you in two
Or maybe in three

I hope a frog mistakes you
For a fly
And eats you for lunch
GOODBYE!
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Anger at My Mistake

Contributed by colada on Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 10:02:21 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Hey Shrew!
That's you.
If a normal heart weighed fifty pounds
Yours would weigh two

Misjudgment
Delusion
Accident
Confusion

All you were
Was a big mistake
Here are some others
I hope someone makes

I hope you fall down
An endless flight of wooden stairs
And get spinters from your toes
Up to your hairs

I hope a lumberjack
Mistakes you for a tree
And chops you in two
Or maybe in three

I hope a frog mistakes you
For a fly
And eats you for lunch
GOODBYE!

Copyright © colada ... [ 2006-11-09 10:02:21]
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Re: Anger at My Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 11:39:09 AM AEST
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Never look at any thing you do as a mistake but rather a life lesson, or stepping stone to a higher place. Be strong, as with any thing, anger also passes with time. great write keep up the good work.

Re: Anger at My Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Light_to_your_Darkness on Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 12:16:41 PM AEST
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This is great, I love how you wrote it and the feeling behind it, although I agree...anger at a mistake is normal but don't let it get to you. Good write :)

Re: Anger at My Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by kalbime_aldin on Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 01:15:05 PM AEST
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i love it i mean many ppl show there anger in many ways some let it show some dont and never think of anythink as a mistake but as a lesson to never do it again! nikki

Re: Anger at My Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 01:55:37 PM AEST
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we all felt that one time or the other and a interesting way to pen it good write

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