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prows and silver and steel
thresh the foam,
stirring dunes and brambles-

the enormous ruts of the ebb flow east,
toward the pillars of forest-depths
toward the jetty trunks
against whose edge,
whirlwinds of light collide.

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On Waking from a Dream--

Contributed by Man_On_High on Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 05:23:20 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

..chariots of copper and gold..
prows and silver and steel
thresh the foam,
stirring dunes and brambles-

the enormous ruts of the ebb flow east,
toward the pillars of forest-depths
toward the jetty trunks
against whose edge,
whirlwinds of light collide.

B

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Re: On Waking from a Dream-- (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 07:06:20 AM AEST
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Great imagery here! It leaves me with the impressions we often have of fleeting dreams when waking up.....very pleasant!

Re: On Waking from a Dream-- (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 10:09:17 AM AEST
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This has a very nice flow...Very well written..
Work of excellence!
honey56

Re: On Waking from a Dream-- (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 10:45:42 AM AEST
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This write is dreamy, vivid descriptions like I was floating around right there.

huggers

~Michelle~

Re: On Waking from a Dream-- (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 10th November 2006 @ 09:03:11 PM AEST
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Like waking from a calm peace.....
Dreams are always nice if they have a place...of serneity
Beautiful

Always a friend
Brew~

Re: On Waking from a Dream-- (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 11:24:15 AM AEST
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Sounds like quite the time

I like the concept of the poem a lot

Well executed as always

Your fan-

Re: On Waking from a Dream-- (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 02:03:44 AM AEST
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I agree with Phil
as always you know i love reading your poetry.another masterpiece.

hugs

Re: On Waking from a Dream-- (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 11:40:23 PM AEST
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My dearest friend & fellow poet~ Billy~
So little words can say so much.
You have not only ascribed a most
beautiful masterpiece you have also managed to paint a magical picture
into my wondering mind. Your work
has always left me in awe dearest Billy~
A true poetic master whose beautifully ascribed masterpieces touch the depths of my heart always~
much love n hugs from ur fan/friend,
sue m

Re: On Waking from a Dream-- (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 05:02:46 AM AEST
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Again we see Rimbaud! again sir you are a fraud!

Rimbaud [www.keaggy.com]

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