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Array ( [sid] => 12795 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A thousand Years [time] => 2003-02-17 02:00:00 [hometext] => eh... its about a guy that a girl loves that acts like he doesnt love her, leaves, then comes back. she never stopped loving him. [bodytext] => It feels as if I've slept a thousand years,
Finally being with you has opened my eyes
You have chasen away my darkest fears,
You're everything love defines.

Eternally with you I feel complete.
Nothing could ever rip us apart.
Before you were nothing but discreet,
But now you've learned from your heart.

At first it seemed you never cared,
It made me hurt deep inside
As if I was not important and I feared,
That your love for me died.

But you came back,
And I let you in.
You in my life is what I lack,
You…out of all men.

Please don't break my heart,
Don't let me go again.
Can I be apart?
Of your life again?

It feels as if a thousand years has gone by,
Finally you are now with me.
To be without you I cry,
But you now complete my life story.

A rush of blood to the head,
Wish this day would never end.
I never want to go to bed,
Nothing more I can contend.

I can't fake it any more,
For you I'll do anything.
From now to a thousand years and more,
Because our souls connect with string.

A thousand years I would wait,
For you to find yourself again,
Until this date,
Till my life shall end. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 22 [informant] => frozensuicide [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

A thousand Years

Contributed by frozensuicide on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It feels as if I've slept a thousand years,
Finally being with you has opened my eyes
You have chasen away my darkest fears,
You're everything love defines.

Eternally with you I feel complete.
Nothing could ever rip us apart.
Before you were nothing but discreet,
But now you've learned from your heart.

At first it seemed you never cared,
It made me hurt deep inside
As if I was not important and I feared,
That your love for me died.

But you came back,
And I let you in.
You in my life is what I lack,
You…out of all men.

Please don't break my heart,
Don't let me go again.
Can I be apart?
Of your life again?

It feels as if a thousand years has gone by,
Finally you are now with me.
To be without you I cry,
But you now complete my life story.

A rush of blood to the head,
Wish this day would never end.
I never want to go to bed,
Nothing more I can contend.

I can't fake it any more,
For you I'll do anything.
From now to a thousand years and more,
Because our souls connect with string.

A thousand years I would wait,
For you to find yourself again,
Until this date,
Till my life shall end.

Copyright Â© frozensuicide ... [ 2003-02-17 02:00:00]
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Re: A thousand Years (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 02:56:32 AM AEST
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its really heart touching..how great your love is .. This is very beautiful poem. i love to read this.. venkat

Re: A thousand Years (User Rating: 1 )
by bopeep on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 10:40:02 AM AEST
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lovely. are u trying to say that it used to hurt you when chad pretended to hate you when you two weren't dating? i could so see through all ur guys' crap. HAHA! later.

Re: A thousand Years (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 01:31:37 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this Lelu very well written. besides that I dont know what to say.

Your friend,
Joel

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