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Array ( [sid] => 127831 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When You Walk On By [time] => 2006-11-04 21:48:19 [hometext] => This is about one of my ex-boyfriends... [bodytext] => Don't forget to say hi
as you walk on by
you never look at me in the eyes

are you so ashamed?
don't you ever ask?
why can't you just say those words
why can you keep going
while I'm falling apart

I know its been a while
sense we've talked
I see you every day
its like you're okay

you're okay with me
falling apart
don't forget to say hi
as you walk on by

never say bye
when you glance at me
and walk away

you don't seem to care
when you see me cry
as tears stream down
you just walk away

puzzles are your life
we fit so perfectly together
but riddles is your game
so maybe there was a gap
still it felt so real

we've both moved on sense then
I still see you though
it brings back memories
of what we used to be

as you walk on by
you never say hi
and forget to say bye
still makes me cry




-:-Remember to say hi-:-
-:-Remember to say bye-:-
-:-With all your <3 -:-


.::ILOVEYOU::. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 32 [informant] => The_Unknown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
When You Walk On By

Contributed by The_Unknown on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 09:48:19 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Don't forget to say hi
as you walk on by
you never look at me in the eyes

are you so ashamed?
don't you ever ask?
why can't you just say those words
why can you keep going
while I'm falling apart

I know its been a while
sense we've talked
I see you every day
its like you're okay

you're okay with me
falling apart
don't forget to say hi
as you walk on by

never say bye
when you glance at me
and walk away

you don't seem to care
when you see me cry
as tears stream down
you just walk away

puzzles are your life
we fit so perfectly together
but riddles is your game
so maybe there was a gap
still it felt so real

we've both moved on sense then
I still see you though
it brings back memories
of what we used to be

as you walk on by
you never say hi
and forget to say bye
still makes me cry




-:-Remember to say hi-:-
-:-Remember to say bye-:-
-:-With all your <3 -:-


.::ILOVEYOU::.




Copyright © The_Unknown ... [ 2006-11-04 21:48:19]
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Re: When You Walk On By (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 10:10:47 PM AEST
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Sad but beautifully said.
Some exses are just tottaly cold. Don't let him get to u.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: When You Walk On By (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 11:59:29 PM AEST
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very sad...you're probably better off without him anyway, he doesnt seem to have very good qualities...judging by this poem at least...

nicley done,

wiz


Re: When You Walk On By (User Rating: 1 )
by silver_crested_shadow on Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 11:28:00 AM AEST
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its sad, and beautifully laid out, i like it, and it had meaning and at the same time tells people to think about the ones we are around not just ourselves. good write


Re: When You Walk On By (User Rating: 1 )
by JoeyTrib1550 on Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 05:53:56 AM AEST
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Great as always!
I love all of your poems
always filled with so much emotions which everyone can relate to

With much love and regret, for they can't be seperated,
Marc




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