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Array ( [sid] => 127829 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Behind The Madness [time] => 2006-11-04 20:15:35 [hometext] => Loneliness with the broken heart [bodytext] => I hate the things you do to me,
I love the way it used to be.
I know you may have cried
Every time I swallowed my pride.
I brought out all the truth
About my whole troubled youth.
I wish things could go smooth
Like I knew every move.
We all know that its true
That you enjoy what you do.
You gave me all this pain,
Now I try to cover it in vain.
Since I cant live in the past
I might as well stick with my mask.
Ill be the person you want to know,
As long is all this anger doesnt show. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 32 [informant] => David-S [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Behind The Madness

Contributed by David-S on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 08:15:35 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I hate the things you do to me,
I love the way it used to be.
I know you may have cried
Every time I swallowed my pride.
I brought out all the truth
About my whole troubled youth.
I wish things could go smooth
Like I knew every move.
We all know that its true
That you enjoy what you do.
You gave me all this pain,
Now I try to cover it in vain.
Since I cant live in the past
I might as well stick with my mask.
Ill be the person you want to know,
As long is all this anger doesnt show.

Copyright © David-S ... [ 2006-11-04 20:15:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Behind The Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 09:08:23 PM AEST
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Oh David, this is so heart-wrenchingly painful ..

The last four lines completely sealed the sentiment.
They are tremendously powerful.

This is filled with an exacting torment that I'm sure many
are akin to. The loneliness is obvious, as is the broken
heart ..

very well written and emotive.

~Breezy

Re: Behind The Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 10:16:28 PM AEST
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I agree with brezy.
hang tuff. You gotta be yourself.
Sadness endureth a moment but joy last till morning.
huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: Behind The Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 02:27:59 AM AEST
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yes i agree with Breezy on this
good write

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