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The full moon follows us home
it's our friend you know
and when we see our lips glisten
in pearly light
every being fiber bristles
as summer wheat in a breeze
bathed in opal essence.

Renewed by passion
felt as goose flesh
migrating to crown
wonder means
ears as wide as eyes.

This empty cup fills with awe
and with trembling reach
gazes upon the brim
to sip even with bruised lips
renewing our hearts authority
amid the din of ego.
As we fall so can we glory rise

AJPIII
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The Body Cosmic

Contributed by yangdantien on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 02:20:27 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

The full moon follows us home
it's our friend you know
and when we see our lips glisten
in pearly light
every being fiber bristles
as summer wheat in a breeze
bathed in opal essence.

Renewed by passion
felt as goose flesh
migrating to crown
wonder means
ears as wide as eyes.

This empty cup fills with awe
and with trembling reach
gazes upon the brim
to sip even with bruised lips
renewing our hearts authority
amid the din of ego.
As we fall so can we glory rise

AJPIII

Copyright © yangdantien ... [ 2006-11-04 02:20:27]
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Re: The Body Cosmic (User Rating: 1 )
by mastersr16 on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 02:58:22 AM AEST
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good write, makes me want to go look at the moon right now, an listen to the sounds of the night.

Re: The Body Cosmic (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 06:27:36 PM AEST
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AJ~ the moon evokes such beautiful thoughts into my mind. I watch it and admire it's beauty from afar. Life is like stepping stones. One falls, but gets up to face yet another challenge in life. Your work touches my heart and captures me entirely my friend.
Always a plasure to read your amazing work.
take care my friend.
love, hugs n prayers,
Sue M

Re: The Body Cosmic (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 12:32:41 AM AEST
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ahhh a fellow moon watcher, was full the other night so beautiful. Your poetry is beauty in all forms. I'm becomming a huge fan.

Michelle

Re: The Body Cosmic (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 05:01:28 PM AEST
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Oooo, I need to take more trips into your archives, sweetie! This is a gem!

Your sweet~lipped moonmaiden
*wink*

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