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SultryRose's Signatures

They found you there all alone
A letter from Amanda you clutched.
Your last moments peacefull it seems.
Gosh, we should have stayed in touch.

This one's for you, my neice.
How we'll miss you down here.
Yeah, just for you, I write.
Hadn't seen you for many years.

We all have memories, our own.
Your children will miss you.
Now you watch over them all.
Your luv will keep them from blue.

Your burdens have been lifted
As heaven is your personal space.
God has given you his eternal luv
As now you can see his face.

You turned your life around
Gave up old habits, we know.
Life for you had been so hard.
Now you walk in heaven's glow.
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FOR DENESE

Contributed by emystar on Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 11:43:54 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

SultryRose's Signatures

They found you there all alone
A letter from Amanda you clutched.
Your last moments peacefull it seems.
Gosh, we should have stayed in touch.

This one's for you, my neice.
How we'll miss you down here.
Yeah, just for you, I write.
Hadn't seen you for many years.

We all have memories, our own.
Your children will miss you.
Now you watch over them all.
Your luv will keep them from blue.

Your burdens have been lifted
As heaven is your personal space.
God has given you his eternal luv
As now you can see his face.

You turned your life around
Gave up old habits, we know.
Life for you had been so hard.
Now you walk in heaven's glow.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2006-11-03 23:43:54]
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Re: FOR DENESE (User Rating: 1 )
by mastersr16 on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 12:04:36 AM AEST
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im so sorry, i know what it feels like to loose someone so close, but a very good poem, it should inspire us all to talk to our loved ones more.

Re: FOR DENESE (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 12:15:31 AM AEST
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Oh Emy, I send much peace and love to you and your family. This was a beautiful write to your neice. I'm sure you made her smile.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: FOR DENESE (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 12:44:46 AM AEST
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Condolences on your loss Lady Emy~
"Death is but a doorway to eternity"
You have ascribed a most beautiful piece of poetry for your niece my dear friend. I know she'll be smiling with pride down at you from the pearly white gates of heaven.
My heart, thoughts and prayers are with you, Amanda and family~
with love n prayers,
Sue M

Re: FOR DENESE (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 11:48:07 AM AEST
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Re: FOR DENESE (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 12:42:15 PM AEST
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Em,
I'm so so sorry for you loss. Times such as these leave us feeling a bit blue but we can hold onto the fact that our loved ones are in true health and experiencing joy and wholeness. Easier said than done though we all are sad to see them go.

A beautiful poem and pic and may healing come to you and your family durning this time.

Michelle

Re: FOR DENESE (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 12:15:40 AM AEST
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I am so sorry emy.. I wish you and your family peace, also. I hope you know I'm always here if you need me, as you've been for me. This is a wonderful write for your niece.
Luvs ya.
.::Jess::.

Re: FOR DENESE (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 11:14:17 PM AEST
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Wow Emy ... I think Honey56 may have said it best ...

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for what could I hope to add to such a heartfelt offering ?

Nazzy ~
( I felt that one )

Re: FOR DENESE (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 08:30:49 AM AEST
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Always comfort words and hold the memories in your heart. Each life becomes an eternal piece of your soul. Hugs.

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