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I still hold on, I hold on to my bear as if it were you.
Everything, everything makes me think of you!
Why can i not let go? I have never felt this much pain before.
My heart died that day, that day with you.
Never before had we been so good, so in love.
Why did it happen, God why!?
That last night love, that last night with you.
I shall never forget it love.. no not ever.
As I sat on the window sill watching the rain fall.
Now i think the night was crying, crying for me.
For night knew what morning had in store for you and I.
It rained into the next morning to match the tears i cried
From that dreadful morning phone call.
Never had i slept so good that last night.
That last night with you. Never no not ever shall i rest again.
It was my last smile, my last laugh.
That night, that night with you.
I am just an exsistance now without a heart for it died that day...
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That last night with you

Contributed by kaleidoscope on Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 08:49:19 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

As I sit here writing, tears run down my face.
I still hold on, I hold on to my bear as if it were you.
Everything, everything makes me think of you!
Why can i not let go? I have never felt this much pain before.
My heart died that day, that day with you.
Never before had we been so good, so in love.
Why did it happen, God why!?
That last night love, that last night with you.
I shall never forget it love.. no not ever.
As I sat on the window sill watching the rain fall.
Now i think the night was crying, crying for me.
For night knew what morning had in store for you and I.
It rained into the next morning to match the tears i cried
From that dreadful morning phone call.
Never had i slept so good that last night.
That last night with you. Never no not ever shall i rest again.
It was my last smile, my last laugh.
That night, that night with you.
I am just an exsistance now without a heart for it died that day...
that day with you.

Copyright © kaleidoscope ... [ 2006-11-03 20:49:19]
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Re: That last night with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 03:09:32 PM AEST
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you did a great job with this piece very, very powerful writing. Very well done indeed.

J.

Re: That last night with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 05:01:26 PM AEST
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Sad but touching...A very good post..
I do hope you feel better soon...
honey56

Re: That last night with you (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 08:21:04 PM AEST
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I feel the pain in your heart, tis a sad day when the one we love leaves us. Oh the pain we go through when that dreadful day comes, but know this my friend, life will go on. The pain will subside, soon the skys will open and the sun will shine down on you and ease the pains in your heart.

Best wishes and great work!

Eddie Dean

Re: That last night with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 07:43:33 PM AEST
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soooooooo sad!!! i know how u feel though....it never is the same after....your heart dies....

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