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Array ( [sid] => 127794 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => internet messenger [time] => 2006-11-03 19:22:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i'm looking at your nickname ,it's always the same
i'm looking at your dp it's always cute as it's meant to be
how far i can hold my hands from nudging you ?
how this love could be true ?

i couldn't sleep i felt you were there ,that's how i seek you everywhere.
i guess your world is full of things ,that you can never glimpse
someone like me,,,,, ,actually was sent to you for free

i wait and wait ,why i always hesitate
i can never tell you i love on a line ,you may think i'm lyin
so what do you think i should do ,i guess i should meet you
but how? when we have no time , it's like testing a prime.

tell me if you don't love someone ,how i be the one
should i lie ,should i cry ? or i just simply try
how i try when you are not a chance , i fail then you become my lance

i donno how these words cometogether ,even my inspiration have no feather
somepoeple beleive words may do the do , but i still donno wht to do.

a click or a double click , oh god this is so sick
online message will be short but you'll answer ,
email message will be long but is gonna cause me a fear cancer.

should i wait and see ,damnit i gotta set me free
this time it's not a bricks, i'm a prisoner of a matrix

now you see ,what makes us three
you ,him and me

and here you are become off the line,, and i'm ending as a rooted sine [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 22 [informant] => onlyoneheart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
internet messenger

Contributed by onlyoneheart on Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 07:22:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



i'm looking at your nickname ,it's always the same
i'm looking at your dp it's always cute as it's meant to be
how far i can hold my hands from nudging you ?
how this love could be true ?

i couldn't sleep i felt you were there ,that's how i seek you everywhere.
i guess your world is full of things ,that you can never glimpse
someone like me,,,,, ,actually was sent to you for free

i wait and wait ,why i always hesitate
i can never tell you i love on a line ,you may think i'm lyin
so what do you think i should do ,i guess i should meet you
but how? when we have no time , it's like testing a prime.

tell me if you don't love someone ,how i be the one
should i lie ,should i cry ? or i just simply try
how i try when you are not a chance , i fail then you become my lance

i donno how these words cometogether ,even my inspiration have no feather
somepoeple beleive words may do the do , but i still donno wht to do.

a click or a double click , oh god this is so sick
online message will be short but you'll answer ,
email message will be long but is gonna cause me a fear cancer.

should i wait and see ,damnit i gotta set me free
this time it's not a bricks, i'm a prisoner of a matrix

now you see ,what makes us three
you ,him and me

and here you are become off the line,, and i'm ending as a rooted sine




Copyright © onlyoneheart ... [ 2006-11-03 19:22:12]
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Re: internet messenger (User Rating: 1 )
by Lady_Daisy on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 10:12:09 PM AEST
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You need to learn how to use spell check, use more descriptive words. This poem is meant to be emotional. Yet, I did not feel any emotion coming from this poem at all.


Re: internet messenger (User Rating: 1 )
by onlyoneheart on Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 08:42:51 AM AEST
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well read the name it's not meant to be emotional ,,it's a program who's talking not me ,,i may be wrong in putting it under love romance field or something ..but i guess i don't hav to use tht spell check ,,and you can't say it's supposed to be emotional ..u may said tht because the category it was putted in and i'm sorry for tht




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