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When Broken Hearts Fail To Mend
Contributed by
MyNameIsJonas
on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 11:19:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When broken hearts fail to mend
You are left alone, by yourself, to tend
To the hole in your chest, pierced at the spot
The weapon removed and bleeding a lot.
Your heart's still beating but with every pump
Your feelings for her spew out in a slump
And after each day the hole gets larger
But your love for her is plugged to a charger
That renews your hope with each reminisce
Of the golden times; a state of bliss
But the wait is long and your heart is weak
And soon the pain would reach its peak.
And you'll know the wait will feel like torture
But you can do it because it's for her.
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MyNameIsJonas
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2006-11-02 23:19:42]
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Re: When Broken Hearts Fail To Mend
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by kaleidoscope on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 11:31:19 PM AEST
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| "But your love for her is plugged to a charger." wow i know what that feels like! every little happy thought seems to ignite it again! maybe its true that love is blinding and it keeps no record of wrongs....I liked this a lot! |
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Re: When Broken Hearts Fail To Mend
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by brittaney on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 08:53:23 PM AEST
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AWW!!! thats so cute! very good too! I really liked the "And after each day the hole gets larger But your love for her is plugged to a charger" this painted a picture in my mind. Well done
brittaney~ |
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