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Array ( [sid] => 127753 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I pray to be with you [time] => 2006-11-02 18:03:38 [hometext] => once you love someone.. that person is forever apart of you [bodytext] => So many tears
So much pain
So much stress I cannot take
So many dreams
So many wishes
I pray
I want you
I want to need you til the end
I need your support
I feel insecure
You believe its going to stay the same
Believe me its going to change
Why are you going away
Why can't you stay
For ur life's sake?
Don't leave me
I'm scared
Do come back
I pray
To be with you
Our love vs.religion
Impossible to stay
I still pray
God feel my sorrow heart
I don't want to be apart
I don't understand
When you LOVE someone so trully
that person is forever apart of YOU
Something has to go wrong
When you open ur fist its gone
Leaving memories, tears and pain
God I hope there's no tomorrow

[comments] => 7 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Saloni [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

I pray to be with you

Contributed by Saloni on Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 06:03:38 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

So many tears
So much pain
So much stress I cannot take
So many dreams
So many wishes
I pray
I want you
I want to need you til the end
I need your support
I feel insecure
You believe its going to stay the same
Believe me its going to change
Why are you going away
Why can't you stay
For ur life's sake?
Don't leave me
I'm scared
Do come back
I pray
To be with you
Our love vs.religion
Impossible to stay
I still pray
God feel my sorrow heart
I don't want to be apart
I don't understand
When you LOVE someone so trully
that person is forever apart of YOU
Something has to go wrong
When you open ur fist its gone
Leaving memories, tears and pain
God I hope there's no tomorrow

Copyright © Saloni ... [ 2006-11-02 18:03:38]
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Re: I pray to be with you (User Rating: 1 )
by kaleidoscope on Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 10:53:17 PM AEST
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From your heart to mine...I know exactly how you feel! When it is real true "love" it will never leave and stays apart of you always because you have given your heart completely away. I feel for you..i lost my one true love and knew id never feel that way towards anyone else and i kept praying..a year later we were back together and stronger then before! Keep your head up...true love always finds a way!

Re: I pray to be with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 01:25:48 AM AEST
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Sue sheds some *tears* for Saloni. I feel your pain in my heart my friend. Nothing should ever stand in the way of love be it religion, race, colour or so on... True love has a funny way of working itself out somehow. Nothing shall stand in the way of true love. My heart and prayers are with you my friend. May what you wish for come true dearest Saloni~ A sad and heart touching write.
Wishing you the best always~
hugs n prayers,
Sue M

Re: I pray to be with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Saloni on Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 12:27:40 PM AEST
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last line meant to be "God I hope there's no tomorrow again"

Re: I pray to be with you (User Rating: 1 )
by onlyoneheart on Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 02:13:50 PM AEST
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thats really nice poem, i wish u recover from ur sorrow

Re: I pray to be with you (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 11:11:05 PM AEST
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really deep line - When you open ur fist its gone

I know exactly what ur going thru, that's my life for the last year or so. Keep praying, if u pray sincerely, good things will happen. God loves all of us. "This too shall pass."
Good heartfelt write.

God bless

Re: I pray to be with you (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthie1983 on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 12:30:48 PM AEST
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Hey, wow, exactly how u feel, hope u feeling much better. writing it down sure helps. good job!

Re: I pray to be with you (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_in_the_darkness09 on Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 04:58:56 PM AEST
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i am really sorry for whatever happened to you, and i wish there was something i could do that would ease your pain, because i too have felt this way.
well, good luck once again.

{rA!N}

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