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Array ( [sid] => 127749 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => His Soul Will Fly [time] => 2006-11-02 16:51:59 [hometext] => This is about one who has lost a love. It's about despairing greif, and he with 'death' finds peace.. [bodytext] => Crawling by, no sins to hide
No rules we follow in this game we play
Sweet sensation but sorry probation
Caroline singing, within the fray

Violins a’ playing, lovers a’ straying
Upon fields of love, songs of heartbreak
Listen, but hard as they fallaciously try
They hear naught but their beating heart ache

Fall into my upraised arms
Death we practice, but try we might
Instead our pain comes back again
As we attempt to quell this fight

Twins of sorrow, ne’er comes daybreak
A single tear falls from the sky
A catching silence, and his body falls
And up in heaven, his soul will fly. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 22 [informant] => drifting_heart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

His Soul Will Fly

Contributed by drifting_heart on Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 04:51:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Crawling by, no sins to hide
No rules we follow in this game we play
Sweet sensation but sorry probation
Caroline singing, within the fray

Violins a’ playing, lovers a’ straying
Upon fields of love, songs of heartbreak
Listen, but hard as they fallaciously try
They hear naught but their beating heart ache

Fall into my upraised arms
Death we practice, but try we might
Instead our pain comes back again
As we attempt to quell this fight

Twins of sorrow, ne’er comes daybreak
A single tear falls from the sky
A catching silence, and his body falls
And up in heaven, his soul will fly.

Copyright Â© drifting_heart ... [ 2006-11-02 16:51:59]
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Re: His Soul Will Fly (User Rating: 1 )
by kaleidoscope on Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 08:27:20 PM AEST
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ummm I think you wrote this about me...funny but my mouth literally dropped open when i read this! My name is caroline and as i was reading this i am listening to "how to save a life by the fray"( i know thats not what you meant by that but weird coincidence) and the rest of this poem is about me too but i wont go into detail! it made me cry...thank you for posting this! and i think i said to much!

Re: His Soul Will Fly (User Rating: 1 )
by Kourtni on Thursday, 18th June 2009 @ 05:00:50 PM AEST
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I think you did an excellent job with writing this poem. The only negative thing is that the bold and italic words are a bit distracting. Other than that, the poem is very well written and heart warming! Great job!!

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