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Below the Radar
Contributed by
Exodus
on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 01:11:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Holding on to something,
That which seems impaired.
Thoughts that creep like frost--
They're creeping and I think I'm scared.
Careful now,
As not to miss your step.
Tip-toe across the edge of a razor.
Try and try and try to forget, forget, forget.
Hold your breath--
If you want to live,
The waters rushing--
But safety is not mine to give.
First you run.
Then you hide.
Sounds so awful.
I should have lied.
Your mind is an understatement,
A secluded version of perfection.
I hope you don't show up on radar;
It would be in your best interest to avoid detection
See you run
See you spy
I hope you smile
You hope I die
Copyright ©
Exodus
... [
2006-11-02 13:11:11]
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Re: Below the Radar
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 01:37:27 PM AEST
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wow,pretty hardcore.I like your flow,but more than that, I wish you peace.
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Below the Radar
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by OneChance on
Saturday, 20th June 2009 @ 08:08:16 PM AEST
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| This really spoke to me . I really hope you overcame whatever it was that inspired you . |
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