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[title] => Longig For Love
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[bodytext] => I sit here with a heavy heart and tears streaming down my face desperately wanting to be loved and to be held by his strong embrace. I long for the feeling of completness and happiness. I yearn for someone to share my life, my dreams, my passions and desires. Someone to hold me tight and kiss me ever so gently. To lay with me at night and whisper ever so softly I Love You, everything will be all right.
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Longig For Love
Contributed by
journey
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Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 08:20:49 AM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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I sit here with a heavy heart and tears streaming down my face desperately wanting to be loved and to be held by his strong embrace. I long for the feeling of completness and happiness. I yearn for someone to share my life, my dreams, my passions and desires. Someone to hold me tight and kiss me ever so gently. To lay with me at night and whisper ever so softly I Love You, everything will be all right.
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Re: Longig For Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 09:55:14 AM AEST
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| I like the words you use to express your feelings, but the layout is awful, maybe just a little more care on how your words look when posted. Just try a preview first, and look how others have presented their work. It will make your poetry look a lot better, but maybe your unhappiness overshadowed everything. I hope your wishes are granted in the not too distant future. |
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Re: Longig For Love
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 03:02:46 PM AEST
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YOur sadness and longing come through so deeply here.
I do agree put it more in stanza form it will only add to the meaning that is so fluent throughout this write.
Nicely done
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Longig For Love
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 12:48:57 PM AEST
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This was good.. I Know that feeling... Great poem...
Take care
Christina |
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