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[aid] => mick
[title] => R.I.P.
[time] => 2006-10-30 18:34:26
[hometext] => Please leave comments, I need constructive criticism because I just started therefore Im trying to improve
[bodytext] => I feel that I am missing something in my life Like a piece is missing out of my heart Someone has it and it’s hard to let them go Hard to go on in life when I know that I will never be whole Never be full again, because you helped make me stronger Not just my lover but also one of my best friends Cause I could sit and tell you about everything And know that you’d understand and never judge me I even let you meet my family And I don’t let just anyone do that Heartbroken that we had this fight and I said we couldn’t be friends Knowing I was lying because I can’t loose you Like a cake with no icing It’s just not right I know that I went off but that’s because I was hurt Felt like you were stomping on my heart Blow after blow to my soul and I wanted to get you back Make you hurt the way you hurt me Saying words that I didn’t mean Know I would never say unless I was mad And now I regret it so now I’m sad Because I know it will never be the same I can already tell it’s started to change You don’t even look at me the same The girl that never try’s to put you down Always try to lift you up Because I know your life is tough But let me be real It’s hard to always be positive, when I feel That you don’t do the same Kind of felt like you were playing a game Me as the boomerang you throw And you know I’d come back Know that whatever you do I will always back you up Never a relationship but always a friend with benefits of course, Never took that step cause I let you have me without one And it’s my fault cause I let you get comfortable with that Because love really is blind And you did take over my mind Because you were all that I thought about But recently my mind is telling me to wake up, Maybe its just not meant to be, He doesn’t have the same feelings as me, Didn’t even open his heart all the way up I don’t know why, but maybe if I did, mines wouldn’t be so broke Said I’d be real so that’s what I’m doing It’s tight but its right and its time that it was said Time that it was laid to bed Because I’m tired of talking and explaining to you how I feel, Maybe its time for this relationship to die, Rest in peace, I’ve already cried Cried too much and the funerals over Time to wipe up my tears and start over [comments] => 2 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 48 [informant] => LadyReeSee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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