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Array ( [sid] => 127622 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Art [time] => 2006-10-30 17:48:40 [hometext] => I wrote this duh, thinking about the hurt! [bodytext] => A cold Heart a bloody art
The pain you give just never ends.
You told me things i let you in,
You showed me love but
thats all come to an end
The slits get longer
The blood gets brighter.
I climb into my bed and
cry until i feel life is dead
Sleep wont come to me now
all i want to do is let go.

I walk into the place of pain
where i take everything in vain.
I see you with her, and i smile
i could never make you feel that way.
Its done i know its just hard to let
go of something that was so right.

I climb back into bed. And hold
your picture has the world around
me gets darker. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 254 [topic] => 13 [informant] => donttrytofixme [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Art

Contributed by donttrytofixme on Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 05:48:40 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A cold Heart a bloody art
The pain you give just never ends.
You told me things i let you in,
You showed me love but
thats all come to an end
The slits get longer
The blood gets brighter.
I climb into my bed and
cry until i feel life is dead
Sleep wont come to me now
all i want to do is let go.

I walk into the place of pain
where i take everything in vain.
I see you with her, and i smile
i could never make you feel that way.
Its done i know its just hard to let
go of something that was so right.

I climb back into bed. And hold
your picture has the world around
me gets darker.

Copyright © donttrytofixme ... [ 2006-10-30 17:48:40]
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Re: Art (User Rating: 1 )
by vikingbrokk on Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 06:27:12 PM AEST
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you are not alone in feeling this way...

Re: Art (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyReeSee on Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 06:37:55 PM AEST
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I like it, it seems like all the poems I read today are saying exactly how Im feeling

Re: Art (User Rating: 1 )
by Sio on Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 09:11:33 PM AEST
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I agree with the other two posters. It is how I'm feeling right now, and I really connect with it.

Re: Art (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 09:22:42 PM AEST
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You're not alone...trust me. This kind of pain is so great...
Peace be with you

~Ravon~

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